TOPIC 2: In many cities,, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks? (handled)

Some people have a positive attitude that using video cameras in public areas can lower the criminal level but others worries about personal privacy. In my point of view, I strongly believe that setting camcorders in public places brings about more advantages than disadvantages.

Putting video cameras around the public areas sometimes raise some concerns about privacy. Residents can sense being tracked which means their seclusion spaces are not being guaranteed. Therefore, they feel disturbed and uncomfortable when they are outside. Second, recorded videos including personal images can be used without their permission, which consequently affect their private lives.

Besides, there are several advantages of using video cameras in the public places. They can be very useful when police need evidence about cases or accidents. For example, when a car accident happen, police can rely on videos which are recorded by closed - circuit televisions to clarify the causes. In addition, criminal level can be reduced by the public video cameras. When a person is about to commit the crime, they feel being watched due to cameras are everywhere. Thus, they are afraid of being caught with stored evidences then they will hesitate and probably give up carrying out harmful actions. As a result, the criminal level will be decreased.

In conclusion, using closed - circuit televisions in public areas have both benefits and drawbacks but usefulness can outweigh the downsides

TOPIC 2: In many cities,, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks? (handled)

Some people have a positive attitude that using video cameras in public areas can lower the criminal level (wrong phrase) but others worries (wrong form) about personal privacy. In my point of view, I strongly believe that setting camcorders in public places brings about more advantages than disadvantages.

Putting video cameras around the public areas sometimes raise some concerns about privacy. Residents (pedestrians) can sense that they are being tracked which means their seclusion spaces (wrong phrase ) are not being guaranteed. Therefore, they feel disturbed and uncomfortable when they are outside. Second, recorded videos including personal images can be used without their permission, which consequently affect their private lives.

Besides, there are several advantages of using video cameras in the public places. They can be very useful when police need evidence about cases crimes or accidents. For example, when a car accident happen, (wrong form) police can rely on videos which are recorded by closed - circuit televisions to clarify identify / determine the causes. In addition, criminal level (wrong phrase) can be reduced by the public video cameras. When a person is about to commit the crime, they feel that they are being watched due to cameras are everywhere. (wrong clause structure) Thus, they are afraid of being caught with stored evidences (wrong phrase ) then they will hesitate and probably give up carrying out harmful actions. As a result, the criminal level (wrong phrase ) will be decreased.

In conclusion, using closed - circuit televisions in public areas have (wrong form) both benefits and drawbacks but their usefulness can outweigh the downsides (missing punctuation)

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Some people have a positive attitude that using video cameras in public areas can lower the crime statistics but others worry about personal privacy. I strongly believe that setting camcorders in public places brings about more advantages than disadvantages.

Putting video cameras around the public areas sometimes raise some concerns about privacy. Pedestrians can sense that they are being tracked which means their private spaces are not being guaranteed. Therefore, they feel disturbed and uncomfortable when they are outside. Second, recorded videos including personal images can be used without their permission, which consequently affect their private lives.

In contrast, there are several advantages of using video cameras in the public places. They can be very useful when police need evidence about cases or accidents. For example, when a car accident happens, police can rely on videos which are recorded by closed-circuit televisions to identify the causes. In addition, crime statistics can be reduced by the public video cameras. When a person is about to commit the crime, they feel that they are being watched because cameras are everywhere. Thus, they are afraid of being caught with visual evidences then they will hesitate and probably give up carrying out illegal actions . As a result, the crime statistics will be decreased.

In conclusion, using closed-circuit televisions in public areas has both benefits and drawbacks but their usefulness can outweigh the downsides.

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Some people have a positive attitude that using video cameras in public areas can lower the incidence of crime crime statistics but others worry about personal privacy. I strongly believe that setting camcorders in public places brings about more advantages than disadvantages.

Putting video cameras around the public areas sometimes raise some concerns about privacy. Pedestrians can sense that they are being tracked which means their private spaces are not being violated. guaranteed. Therefore, they feel disturbed and uncomfortable when they are outside. Second, recorded videos, including personal images, could be used without their permission, which consequently affects their private lives.

In contrast, there are several advantages of using video cameras in the public places. They can be very useful when police need evidence for criminal acts about cases or accidents. For example, when a car accident happens, police can rely on videos which are recorded by closed-circuit televisions to identify the causes. In addition, crime statistics can be reduced by the public video cameras. When a person is about to commit a the crime, they feel that they are being watched because cameras are everywhere. Thus, they are afraid of being caught on camera and with visual evidences then they will hesitate and probably give up carrying out their illegal actions . As a result, the crime statistics will decrease. be decreased.

In conclusion, using closed-circuit televisions in public areas has both benefits and drawbacks but their usefulness can outweigh the downsides.

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"incidence of crime" is fine. You can also use "crime rate."

It will reduce the incidence of crime / crime rate.

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