I have a negative idea for my writting task 2. Does it reduce my test score ? Otherwise correct the grammar and vocabulary for this passage.

Secondly, in the Team Selection English Tests have multiple choice test with four options. Despite unknow the meaning of three options, candidates can choose a correct answer and reached valedictorian in the exam. Clearly, working round the clock is a indispensable thing but luckily helps achieve unexpected success.

This is my first time posting, and many rules are not clear so I hope to skip

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Hello Huy Đỗ Nguyễn Vĩnh!

Welcome to the Forums. I hope you will learn a lot here.

Unfortunately, I do not understand your post.

Huy Đỗ Nguyễn VĩnhI have a negative idea

What is your "negative idea?" Do you mean that you are discouraged, unhappy, or unsure?

Huy Đỗ Nguyễn VĩnhDoes it reduce my test score ?

What do you mean by "it"? Do you mean that "negative idea"?

Huy Đỗ Nguyễn VĩnhOtherwise correct the grammar and vocabulary for this passage.

What is the topic you are writing about? If you are writing an IELTS Task 2 essay, you need to write at least four paragraphs:

1. Introduction and thesis statement.
2. Body paragraph
3. Body paragraph
4. Conclusion paragraph.


You have written three sentences. It is not an essay.

I will try to write this in correct, natural English.


Secondly in The Team Selection English Tests are have multiple choice tests with four options. Despite unknow Even if they do not know the meaning of the three incorrect options, candidates can choose the fourth correct answer and reached valedictorian get a 100% score on the exam. Clearly, working around the clock is an indispensable thing (I don't understand why you put this in.) but if they are lucky, they can be helps achieve unexpectedly successful.



First, I am beginner to learn Ielts so my some sentences in my full essay are used from some other essay online, do not copy completely. When I posted it on another website they said I plagiarized and block my account so I posted a part of the essay that I was most curious. If I am not considered for plagiarism, I will ask for permission to post my full essay

Secondly, My friends in Australia said that it was a bad thing in the exam. If I don't know the correct answer, I shoudn't choose any option, It shows the spirit of fairplay . When the examiner read the essay article they would have an aversion to the test and I should avoid it. In my opinion, my passage do not offend religion or politics I want to ask moderator about my problem.

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First, I am beginner beginning to learn IELTS Ielts so my some some of my sentences in my full essay are taken from some other essay online. I do not copy them completely. When I posted it on another website they said I plagiarized and blocked my account. So I posted the part of the essay that I was most curious about. If I am not considered will not be blocked for plagiarism, I will ask for permission to post my full essay.


If you copy sentences from an online essay, please tell us you are doing that, and include a link to that site. Then we will be able to help you, not the person whose essay you copied. We will not block your account.

For example:

I am a beginning writer and have used some sentences from this model essay:

https://www.ielts-exam.net/ielts_writing_samples_task_2/801/


My essay:



Thanks for your comment AlpheccaStars. I really appreciate all that you do

My full essay:

It is argued that hard working is a crucial element of success. While many people agree with this opinion, I believe that hard working and luck are two factors that exist side by side.

On the one hand, determined and industrious people will be successful in whatever they do. Hard working people usually attain their goals. Thomas Edison, who is one of the greatest inventors in the 20th century, is an excellent example of such a notion. He conducted numerous experiments with the filament until the finest light bulb was invented. His hard work, rather than luck, was acknowledged by mankind. Another notable case of success through determination is Nick Vujicic, who is an Australian motivational speaker. He suffered from a rare disorder, which resulted in the absence of four limbs. Despite not having any hands and legs, Vujicic earned a bachelor degree with a double majors in accountancy and financial planning. Now he travels around the world to inspire people as an evangelist

On the other hand, luck is a factor determining one’s achievement. For instance, Mendeleev was an famous Russian scientist trying to discover the nature of elements. Despite working tirelessly for few decades, he still could not solve his research problem. Suddenly, in his miracle dream, he envisioned a table in which all the chemical elements were arranged according to their atomic weights. Secondly, in the Team Selection Tests are multiple choice test with four options. Even if they do not know the meaning of three correct answer , candidates can choose the fourth correct answer and get a 100% score on the exam. Clearly, working round the clock is an indispensable element but luck helps us achieve unexpected success.

In conclusion, based on the examples I have mentioned above, both hard working and luck can play a key role in individual success.

Source:

https://www.facebook.com/hocvietielts/posts/topic-whether-or-not-someone-achieve-their-aims-is-mostly-by-a-question-of-luck-/1137895912906999/

https://essayforum.com/writing/someone-achieves-aims-mostly-question-luck-71605/

http://eng.vn/tai-lieu/dap-an-tham-khao-ielts-writing-task-2-2015-2016-5171/ (page 14)

Huy Đỗ Nguyễn VĩnhSource

https://www.facebook.com/hocvietielts/posts/topic-whether-or-not-someone-achieve-their-aims-is-mostly-by-a-question-of-luck-/1137895912906999/

Do not use this person's essays as a good model. It is full of grammatical errors.

https://essayforum.com/writing/someone-achieves-aims-mostly-question-luck-71605/

That one is not any better. It has many errors.

The last link has the best examples.

I advise that if you are going to copy, use, or memorize sentences from essays, use those written by native English speakers but beware that even native speakers make mistakes.

Students: We have free audio pronunciation exercises.

I have highlighted the text that needs improvement.



It is argued that hard working is a crucial element of success. While many people agree with this opinion, I believe that hard working and luck are two factors that exist side by side. (Right. But are they equally significant, or is one more influential than the other?)

On the one hand, determined and industrious people will be successful in whatever they do. Hard working people usually attain their goals. Thomas Edison, who is one of the greatest inventors in the 20th century, is an excellent example of such a notion. He conducted numerous experiments with the filament until the finest light bulb was invented. His hard work, rather than luck, was acknowledged by mankind. Another notable case of success through determination is Nick Vujicic, who is an Australian motivational speaker. He suffered from a rare disorder, which resulted in the absence of four limbs. Despite not having any hands and legs, Vujicic earned a bachelor degree with a double majors in accountancy and financial planning. Now he travels around the world to inspire people as an evangelist

On the other hand, luck is a factor determining one’s achievement. For instance, Mendeleev was an famous Russian scientist trying to discover the nature of elements. Despite working tirelessly for few decades, he still could not solve his research problem. Suddenly, in his miracle dream, he envisioned a table in which all the chemical elements were arranged according to their atomic weights. Secondly, in the Team Selection Tests are multiple choice test with four options. Even if they do not know the meaning of three correct answer , candidates can choose the fourth correct answer and get a 100% score on the exam. Clearly, working round the clock is an indispensable element but luck helps us achieve unexpected success.

In conclusion, based on the examples I have mentioned above, both hard working and luck can play a key role in individual success.

I do not understand "improvement" mean. The highlighted words are not good, need to be more academic or not suitable for verbs, nouns, adjectives use with it ?

Huy Đỗ Nguyễn VĩnhI do not understand "improvement" mean.

It means to fix, to make it better. I did not have time to document all the errors, but here are some examples.

AlpheccaStarsHard working people

"Hard-working" as an adjective requires a hyphen.

AlpheccaStarsHe conducted numerous experiments with the filament until the finest light bulb was invented.

He experimented with many different filaments.

"The filament" means there was only one particular filament in all the experiments.

He did not make the finest light bulb. He made the first one. Modern light bulbs are much better.

AlpheccaStars. Secondly, in the Team Selection Tests are multiple choice test with four options.

I gave you corrections in an earlier post.

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