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The table compared the proportion of the inhabitant in one town who cycled by age in 2011.

Overall, the percentage of female cyclists was higher than male cyclists. However, for both gender, the riding bicycle was favored by people who have the ages between 0-17.

The proportion of the people who cycled in the age groups 0-9 for both gender were similar, at just over a half. However, among males aged 10-17, the figures fell to just less than 25%, compared to about 42% for females.

In terms of cyclists aged 18-39 and 40-59-year-old, the figures were much lower. In the former group, only about 17% of women cycled, compared with just under 10% of men. Between the age 40-59, the figures decreased further, to about 12% for females and exactly 8% for males. However, the percentage of the population over 60% who rode bicycles rose significantly, reaching 18.5% for women, compared with around 13% for men.

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