Hi all,

Would somebody please comments my English?

Due to the importance of pharmaceutical promotion, in most countries its activity is regulated and controlled by government regulations and industry code of conducts.

Regards,

Dean
Hi,

Due to the importance of pharmaceutical promotion, in most countries its activity is regulated and controlled by government regulations and industry code of conducts.

I prefer Due to the importance of pharmaceutical promotion, in most countries this activity by pharmaceutical companies is regulated and controlled by government and by an industry code of conducts.

Best wishes, Clive
Thanks Clive!

Cheers,

Dean