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hi everyone, I'm Hao. I'm nineteen years old. Actually I really want to improve my English skills and as I know Writing is one of the most important skills of 4 skills. To improve it I gonna post my daily dairy to everyone and I hope most of people here can help me by fixing my grammar or anything proplems about that. Thanks all a lot.

Today 16th April. I had a boring day. I played game all of morning you know I love stratery game like League of Legends. On the other hand, I studied a lot of new words today by watching English video on youtube, I love it, I see that way is the good way to improve my listening skill, you see that? And now I gonna go to sleep beacause It is so late about 12 pm. okay, that's my diary for today. Thank you so much again for helping me. Bye for then and goodnight=))

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hi everyone, I'm Hao. I'm nineteen years old. Actually I really want to improve my English skills and as I know Writing is one of the most important skills of 4 skills. To improve it I gonna post my daily dairy to everyone and I hope most of people here can help me by fixing my grammar or anything proplems about that. Thanks all a lot.

Today 16th April. I had a boring day. I played game all of morning you know I love stratery game like League of Legends. On the other hand, I studied a lot of new words today by watching English video on youtube, I love it, I see that way is the good way to improve my listening skill, you see that? And now I gonna go to sleep beacause It is so late about 12 pm. okay, that's my diary for today. Thank you so much again for helping me. Bye for then and goodnight=))