It is true that nowadays, in many regions, people are suffering more from obesity but they also become less concerned about their physical health. Whilst there are many triggers for those latent problems, societies could still take steps to mitigate them.
One of the biggest reasons why the medium weight of people is growing hinges on their laziness and hesitance to take exercise. Technology today plays such a crucial role in their life and takes up most of their spare time. Also, it is a natural reflex that people just tend to lie in the bed after a hard-working day instead of looking for any physical practice. When a body does not have any chances to be active and hence release calories, people will gain weight and even expose to some health problems. Accordingly, many people are workers and employees, thus, it means that the majority of their time is spent on sitting and staring at computers. It is undoubted that nobody wants to use their time left to care about their fitness.
However, there can be many feasible measures to tackle those issues. First of all, it is people themselves who could control their own lifestyle and lead to flexible working, which means they have the capacity to prefer one hour per day refreshing and improving not only the body but also mind and brain. Regarding the government, it is its responsibility to raise residents' awareness about their health and the need to perpetuate it. They could open a meeting or campus about instructing people on how to maintain their fresh lifestyle. Eventually, most companies should consider providing flexible choices of time for their employees as well as reducing the required time to work because the healthier their workers are, the more developed companies could become.
All things considered, that phenomenon is such a serious problem for young and old alike. It seems evident that the government ought to take a firm stand on this issue and remind individuals constantly to limit this issue/
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Topic: In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
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All things considered, that phenomenon (wrong word) obesity is such a serious problem for young and old alike. It seems evident that the government ought to take a firm stand on this issue and remind individuals constantly to follow a good diet and to exercise more. limit this issue/
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