In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

The rising number of homeowners, who are fascinating about the history of the place, where they live in. There are several reasons why increasing of this trend as well as some possible ways for people approach the information.

To commence with, the major reason why a number of individuals tend towards this tendency is that it is related to homeowners’ initial characteristic. Most of them enjoy the antiquated architecture and construction. They suppose that the more they find the past of house, the more enjoyable it would be to live there. Knowing the story of the place, inspiring them to the previous owner’s lifestyle. Furthermore, some people research the history behind their own house, connecting with their cultural viewpoint, especially in religion. To exemplify, some people believe that the house can be haunted by a spirit if there is murder case in the house, or it was built in previous cemetery area. In this sense, they tend to avoid living in that house or building.

To find out more about the story behind a house, some possible activities could be lifted up. The widespread availability of the internet has led to spread of information available on the history of the house. Most documents can be found on Internet and some specific places are advertised in media. In addition, some neighbors are worthy with information search. They would have useful data about the history.

In conclusion, there are numerous reasons to favor this notion as well as some possible ways about the trend of researching the history of the house or building.

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The rising number of homeowners, (no comma) who are fascinating (wrong verb form) about the history of the place, (no comma) where they live in. (This is not a sentence. It is a long noun phrase. There is no main verb or predicate.)

There are several reasons why increasing of this trend (Ungrammatical) as well as some possible ways for people approach (wrong verb form, wrong word. We do not "approach information") the information.

To commence with, the major reason why a number of individuals tend towards this tendency (redundant) is that it is (awkward, unnatural) related to homeowners’ initial characteristic. (wrong phrase)


Most of them enjoy the antiquated architecture and construction. They suppose that the more they find out about the past owners and builders of their house, the more enjoyable it would be to live there.

Knowing the story of the place, inspiring them to the previous owner’s lifestyle. (This is not a sentence. It is a long participle phrase There is no main verb or predicate.)

Furthermore, some people research the history behind their own house, connecting to make connections with their cultural viewpoint, especially in religion. To exemplify this, some people believe that the house can be is haunted by a spirit if there was a murder is murder case in the house, or it was built in over an old previous cemetery area. In this sense, they tend to avoid living in that house or building.

To find out more about the story behind a house, some possible activities could be lifted up. (wrong expression) The widespread availability of the internet has led to spread is a good possible source of information available on the history of a city or village, including the buildings and their occupants. the house. Most documents can be found on the Internet and some specific places are advertised in media. (I do not understand this point.) In addition, some neighbors are worthwhile sources of worthy with information search. They would have useful data about the history of the area.

In conclusion, there are numerous reasons to favor this notion (I do not understand this point.) as well as some possible ways to go about the trend of researching the history of the one's house or building.