In today’s world, the increasing in demand of junk food is becoming fashionable in most of countries due to its covenience and low-cost price. The prevalant of fast food has its own benefits as well as drawbacks. From my perspective, this sort of streetfood is going to be a bane rather than a boon.

On the one hand, the merits of junk food have been creating a huge number of people who craving it. The convenience, affordable are indispensable factors of the considerable strength of fast food due to the fact that these cuisine are compatible with people who live on a tight budget. Moreover, the fast food chains arediversified andstandardized with the mushroom growth of reputable fast food brand such as Mc Donald, KFC,Jollibee and so on and these pretigious brandhave been enhancing the opportunity in occupation with a massive labour force over the world to minimize the rate in unemployment.

On the other hand, it is undebatable that consuming too much unhealthy food could lead to unforeseen consequences and severe results, the adverse affected can be seen in health. Fast food ingredients includethe excess of additive and this food is high in calories but low in nutrition. The valid reason for the growth rate of people who contract obesity, diabetes and heart diseases are the causes oflasting and looping this bad habit in long-term period. This issue acts as a precursor to thrive a chronic illness .Futhermore, the government has to spend a great deal of budget on healthcare systems and citizen’s treatment fordisease prevention and promotion of health.

In conclusion, junk food is extremely unhealthy and it create the adverse impaction on people who craving it. I still hold a firm that the disavantages will outweigh the advantages.

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In today’s world, the increasing in demand of junk food is becoming fashionable (wrong word. It does not make sense. You can write that "eating in fast food restaurants is becoming fashionable." ) in most of countries due to its covenience (spelling) and low-cost (Not good. Just "low price") price. The prevalant (wrong form) of fast food has its own benefits as well as drawbacks. From my perspective, this sort of streetfood (wrong word. Street food is what you buy from a person who makes and sells it in a stall, not in a restaurant.) is going to be a bane rather than a boon.

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On the one hand, the merits of junk food is so delicious and satisfying that it attracts a large have been creating a huge number of people who craving (wrong verb form) it.

The convenience, affordable (ungrammatical. "affordable" is an adjective. You used it like a noun.) are indispensable factors of the considerable strength (wrong expression. Food is not described as "strong.") of fast food due to the fact that these cuisine (wrong word. Cuisine is the art of food preparation characteristic of a country, i.e. French cuisine. ) are compatible with people who live on a tight budget.

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