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In many nations, flora and fauna are decreasing. Animals and plants have an imperative role in human life. They provide food, drugs, oxygen, water, and they keep ecosystems in balance. Therefore, the decline of fauna and flora is becoming more serious than ever.

To begin with, humans are exploiting forest resources out of control. As a result, millions of forest areas have been worn down and a lot of wild animals have lost their natural habitat. For example, Vietnam spends about 10% of its forests annually for industrial purposes. However, in recent years, this number is increasing significantly because of the quick development of industries. This has made Vietnam lose plant diversity and some animals are in peril of extinction due to losing their natural home.

Besides, global warming caused an enormous influence on flora and fauna. They are dying because they can not adapt to this temperature shift. For instance, Polar bears are animals, which live in cold weather. They can not swim well so the ice has a vital role in their hunt. However, the ice in the North Pole is melting rapidly due to global warming. In consequence, Polar bears can not easily hunt anymore, and they can be extinct in the next few decades. In addition, under the effects of temperature, air, and melting ice, the number of coral reefs is falling remarkably. This demonstrated that both land plants and underwater plants are enduring the influence of humans' selfish actions.

To solve this problem, the government needs to have appropriate policies to preserve the forests and strict punishment for people who cut down trees illegally. It will make the people know the importance of protecting the environment and the seriousness of their fault. Furthermore, Each one of us should use vehicles rationally. This can minimize greenhouse gases, which is the main reason for climate change, and cause the death of animals and plants every year.

In my opinion, the best way to preserve flora and fauna is that the government should be drastic in protecting the forest and solving deforestation. In short, two main reasons why animals and plants are declining are forest exploitation out of control and global warming.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?


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In many nations, flora and fauna are decreasing. Animals and plants have an imperative vital / critical role in our lives. human life. They provide food, drugs, medicines, oxygen, water, (missing conjunction) and they keep ecosystems in balance. Therefore, the decline of fauna and flora is becoming more serious than ever.


There are two essay prompts:

Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?

You need to address both prompts in the opening paragraph with a very brief idea of your answers.

e.g.

The primary reasons are human activities such as clearing forests, illegal hunting, and emitting greenhouse gases. The issue can only be solved by international cooperation.


To begin with, humans we are exploiting forest resources out of control. As a result, millions of forest acres areas have been worn down (wrong expression) cleared for agriculture and a lot of wild animals have lost their natural habitat. For example, Vietnam spends destroys about 10% of its forests annually for industrial purposes. However, in recent years, this number is has been increasing significantly because of the quick rapid development of industries. This has made Vietnam lose plant diversity and some animal species are in peril of extinction due to losing their natural home.


You need to focus on the question is "Why is this happening?" Not "What is happening?"

See my addition which concentrates on "Why?"

If you answer too much on "What is happening," rather than "Why is this happening" you will lose points for being off-topic.


Besides, all over the world, fossil fuels are being burned to satisfy our need for transportation and energy, releasing tonnes of greenhouse gasses. Together with the removal of trees, which absorb carbon dioxide, there is a buildup of these gasses in the atmosphere, causing the earth's temperature to rise. Global warming causes an enormous problems for the survival of influence on flora and fauna. They are dying because they can not adapt to this temperature shift. For instance, Polar bears are animals, which live in cold weather. They can not swim well so the ice has a vital role in their hunt. However, the ice in the North Pole is melting rapidly due to global warming. In consequence, Polar bears can not easily hunt anymore, and they can be extinct in the next few decades. In addition, under the effects of temperature, air, and melting ice, the number of coral reefs is falling remarkably. This demonstrated that both land plants and underwater plants are enduring the influence of humans' selfish actions.


To solve this problem, the government needs to have appropriate policies to preserve the forests and strict punishment for people who cut down trees illegally. It will make the people know the importance of protecting the environment and the seriousness of their fault. Furthermore, Each one of us should use vehicles rationally. This can minimize greenhouse gases, which is the main reason for climate change, and cause the death of animals and plants every year.

In my opinion, the best way to preserve flora and fauna is that the government should be drastic in protecting the forest and solving deforestation. In short, two main reasons why animals and plants are declining are forest exploitation out of control and global warming.


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In many nations, flora and fauna are decreasing. Animals and plants have an imperative role in human life. They provide food, drugs, oxygen, water, and they keep ecosystems in balance. So the decline of fauna and flora is becoming more serious than ever.

To begin with, humans are exploiting forest resources out of control. As a result, millions of forest areas have been worn down and a lot of wild animals have lost their natural habitat. For example, Vietnam spends about 10% of its forests annually for industrial purposes. However, in recent years, this number is increasing significantly because of the quick development of industries. This has made Vietnam lose plant diversity and some animals are in peril of extinction due to losing their natural home.
Besides, global warming caused an enormous influence on flora and fauna. They are dying because they can not adapt to this temperature shift. For instance, Polar bears are animals, which live in cold weather. They can not swim well so the ice has a vital role in their hunt. However, the ice in the North Pole is melting rapidly due to global warming. In consequence, Polar bears can not easily hunt anymore, and they can be extinct in the next few decades. In addition, under the effects of temperature, air, and melting ice, the number of coral reefs is falling remarkably. This demonstrated that both land plants and underwater plants are enduring the influence of humans' selfish actions.

To solve this problem, the government needs to have appropriate policies to preserve the forests and strict punishment for people who cut down trees illegally. It will make the people know the importance of protecting the environment and the seriousness of their fault. Furthermore, Each one of us should use vehicles rationally. This can minimize greenhouse gases, which is the main reason for climate change, and cause the death of animals and plants every year.

In my opinion, the best way to preserve flora and fauna is that the government should be drastic in protecting the forest and solving deforestation. In short, two main reasons why animals and plants are declining are forest exploitation out of control and global warming.

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  • The large amount of animals and plants are declining in many nation. The prominent cause of this trend is due to deforestation and due to climate change. It can be solved by government actions.
  • the main cause why I think this is happening because of deforestation.moreover, many forest land are using in the name of urbanisation and industrialisation.so the habitats has been declined day by day since last few decades. For example a recent research conducted by times of India shows that 50% of forests are using for the cammerical purpose.that’s the reason of decreasing lot of animals and plants. Another reason is climate change in the environment. The temperature of environment is changed due to some circumstances. So it is also bad effect on wildlife and vegetation. Therefore many species are distinct due to change in climates.
  • This problem can be solved by using various methods. One of which is government should implement law on deforestation. Moreover they can award the people . The authorities are responsible to protect the wildlife. Therefore the government should prohibit the industries which are use chemical gases like carbohydrates. For example if the dangerous gases are less used by a country, many species can be prevented from extinction.
  • To conclude, although there are lot of causes of this problem, the government can prevent the wildlife and vegetation betterly like by a law for wildlife, providing a safe place to them to prevent them for distinction.