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It is widely believed that in the future, all vehicles will follow automated driving, which means only passengers will travel into these means of transports. Although this development would lead to some drawbacks, in this essay, I will explain why the benefits outweigh them.

To begin with, the proponents of this technology are excited by the supposed advantages of traveling in a driverless vehicle. The first one is that automation always works orderly and scientifically. Consequently, these types of machinery rarely put passengers in trouble by getting behindhand in moving around or even getting lost. Another issue is that humans’ safety will be assured by driver-free transports. In fact, this concept can be illustrated by the example of China, a country that was successfully applied unmanned conveyances in reality. The figures showed an impressive result that accidents have reduced approximately 48% since driverless cars became commonplace.

Besides, passengers and drivers will benefit enormously from automated transports. Travelers can enjoy a comfortable atmosphere inside cars without being disturbed by the driver. There’s also no need for passengers to face forwards to be vigilant over the dangers or problems. In addition, thousands of people perish year-round in traffic accidents due to neglectful chauffeurs. With the fast-paced development of self-driving transportation, entertainment technology, such as video screens, could be used without any concern of distracting the driver, thus can prevent accidents.

In conclusion, although some worry about the consistency of self-driving vehicles, I believe decreased spending on traffic facilities and increased road safety fully justify this innovation. Governments and corporations should therefore invest more in this promising technology.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?


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It is widely believed that in the future, all vehicles will follow automated driving, which means only passengers will travel into on them. these means of transports. Although this development would lead to some drawbacks, in this essay, I will explain why I believe the benefits outweigh them.


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To begin with, the proponents of this technology are excited by the supposed advantages of traveling in a driverless vehicle. The first one is that automation always works orderly and scientifically. Consequently, these types of vehicles machinery rarely put passengers in trouble by getting being delayed behindhand in moving around or even getting lost. Another issue is that humans’ safety will be assured by driverless -free transports. In fact, this concept can be illustrated by the example of China, a country that was successfully applied in proving unmanned vehicles in actual situations. conveyances in reality. The figures showed an impressive result; that accidents were have reduced approximately 48% after since driverless cars became commonplace.

Besides, passengers and drivers (There are no drivers, so they get no benefits, except unemployment compensation.) will benefit enormously from automated transports. Travelers can enjoy a comfortable atmosphere inside cars without being disturbed by the driver. There’s (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) also no need for passengers to face forwards to be vigilant over the dangers or problems. In addition, thousands of people perish year-round in traffic accidents due to neglectful drivers chauffeurs. A chauffeur is a privately employed driver. It is not the topic.) With the fast-paced development of self-driving transportation, entertainment technology, such as video screens, could be used without any concern of distracting the driver, thus can prevent accidents.

In conclusion, although some worry about the consistency of self-driving vehicles, (You did not mention this point in the body paragraphs. Do not introduce new ideas in the conclusion.) I believe decreased spending on traffic facilities (New idea) and increased road safety fully justify this innovation. Governments and corporations should therefore invest more in this promising technology. (The essay prompt did not ask for a recommendation, so it is off-topic to give one.)

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It is widely believed that in the future, all vehicles will follow automated driving, which means only passengers will travel into these means of transports. Although this development would lead to some drawbacks, in this essay, I will explain why the benefits outweigh them.

To begin with, the proponents of this technology are excited by the supposed advantages of traveling in a driverless vehicle. The first one is that automation always works orderly and scientifically. Consequently, these types of machinery rarely put passengers in trouble by getting behindhand in moving around or even getting lost. Another issue is that humans’ safety will be assured by driver-free transports. In fact, this concept can be illustrated by the example of China, a country that was successfully applied unmanned conveyances in reality. The figures showed an impressive result that accidents have reduced approximately 48% since driverless cars became commonplace.

Besides, passengers and drivers will benefit enormously from automated transports. Travelers can enjoy a comfortable atmosphere inside cars without being disturbed by the driver. There’s also no need for passengers to face forwards to be vigilant over the dangers or problems. In addition, thousands of people perish year-round in traffic accidents due to neglectful chauffeurs. With the fast-paced development of self-driving transportation, entertainment technology, such as video screens, could be used without any concern of distracting the driver, thus can prevent accidents.

In conclusion, although some worry about the consistency of self-driving vehicles, I believe decreased spending on traffic facilities and increased road safety fully justify this innovation. Governments and corporations should therefore invest more in this promising technology.

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