Some people believe that printed newspapers or books will be dismissed in the future due to the development of technology, everything they want to read will be available freely on the Internet. I totally disagree with this idea as my own perspective.

The first reason why I am against the idea of rejecting printed products is that not everyone can easily access to devices connecting with Internet. For instance, elderly people and children encounter many difficulty when they try to use technological devices, so they suit with books or printed newspaper than phones and computers. In additions, poverty are able to purchase a book yet a technological device. Besides, printed newspapers can be read in remote areas where do not have wifi or Internet like countryside and forrest area, which technology can not do.

However, the main reason why I do not support this idea is that they can be harmful to human health. To reading books or news on technological devices, people have to stick their eyes on the screen for a long time, which causes a lot of eyes problems and decreases the ability to see. Moreover, sitting for a while in front of a computer everyday might lead to some serious diseases such as headaches, diabetes or cardiovascular diseases. Thus, using printed products is a friendly choice for everyone.

In conclusion, no matter how advanced technology, the position of books and printed newspapers will never be replaced because of the advantages they bring about to human life.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


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Some people believe that printed newspapers or books will be dismissed (That is not a good verb.) obsolete in the future due to the development of technology,(Not a good phrase. Technology development can be space travel or carbon dioxide reclamation - nothing to do with books.) situation that everything they want to read will be available freely on the Internet. I totally disagree with this idea since the internet will never be accessible everywhere. as my own perspective.

The first reason why I am against the idea of rejecting (Do not write opinion statements in the body paragraphs. These contain the arguments in support of your thesis statement.) Printed material will always be needed in places where the internet is not accessible. products is that not everyone can easily access to devices connecting with Internet. For instance, elderly people and children encounter many difficulties when they try to use computers or smart phones technological devices, so they read suit with books or printed newspapers instead. than phones and computers. In addition, poverty are able to poor people can afford to buy or borrow purchase a book but not a computer. yet a technological device. Besides, printed newspapers can be read in remote areas where there is no do not have wifi or Internet like the countryside, especially deep in a forest. and forrest area, which technology can not do.

However, the main reason why I do not support this idea is that they Furthermore, electronic devices can be harmful to human our health. To read reading books or news on screens, especially small ones, technological devices, people have to stick focus their eyes on the screen for a long time, which causes a lot of eyes problems and decreases the ability to see. Moreover, sitting for a while for long periods in front of a computer everyday might lead to some serious conditions diseases such as headaches, (A headache is not a disease) diabetes or cardiovascular diseases. Thus, using printed products is a friendly choice for everyone.

In conclusion, no matter how advanced the technology, the position of books and printed newspapers will never be replaced because of the advantages they bring about to everyone. human life.

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