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Today, in the modern age, staying at home too much is a common problem among children and teenagers today. It depends on many causes and measures need to be put in place to solve this problem. will be discussed in the following essays.

Starting with this essay, spending too much time and activities in the house has many causes. First we have to talk about excessive use of the internet; In the 4.0 era, using the internet is becoming more and more popular, the use of phones, computers, televisions, etc. is a habit of young people today. The above problem leads to many consequences including the problem we mentioned above that staying at home for too long leads to health effects.

Secondly, it has to be said that parents do not supervise children and the consequence is that exercise is almost neglected, but instead stays at home and spends time on unproductive things. Next to the above reason is the measure, for parents to be tough and need stricter education on the use of internet media and to encourage children and young people about the need to breathe natural air. nature and exercise more.

Finally, the best measures must be taken to solve the above problem of the family in particular and the world in genera

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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could best be taken to solve it?


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It is argued that many youngsters are much more engaged in indoor activities nearly throughout the world . This essay will outline a number of causes of this problem and give solutions to tackle it as possible as.
To begin with , there are a number of reasons why children tend to be reluctant to spend more time indoors.Firstly, the main cause is that with advent of modern technologies, children have more options to spend their time at indoors.Modern-world children who have at least one gadget such as a laptop or smartphone find it more interesting than other things for spending time. Another reason is sedentary lifestyle chosen by many teenagers owing to the popularity of computer games over outdoor games. They are becoming lazier to be outsides with their peers or do physical trainings as indoor activities are less demanding.

On the other hand, there are several effective ways in order to combat this problem. First of all, schools and lyceums should introduce some compulsory subjects which increase students' physical actions and let them try more outdoors. As now schools pay attention to youth's academic levelsand scores instead of their practical abilities. Another solution is that governments should organize some competitions in outside each month which require to dance , draw or run and like these. Also they should be rewarded for their participation as a result, these contests might trigger to develop teenagers' interests in outdoors instead of indoor activities.
In conclusion, nowadays young teenagers are addictive to indoor activities because of modern technology gadgets. The most effective solution is to increase children' s interests in outdoor acts by organizing some physical occasions and rewarding.

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