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In contemporary life, people are becoming more independent in both work and life, which led to the mounting in individual living separately. Although some argue that this tendency brings more positive influences on society than their negative, I believe living alone can entirely have adverse effects on social development. I can identify two main causes, and two broad effects, which we will describe now.

Perhaps the main cause is limited financial resources . This can be seen in the constant rise in average cost to own a house containing enough rooms for many people to live together, indeed, most average or low incomes these days are impossible to pay for a large house. For example, almost all blue collar employees receive low salaries ,which are just able to make end meets with small accommodation. Additionally, jobs in diverse fields involved different working time, meaning that people want to have their own pace of life instead of concerning about others difference.

Turning to negative effects, living individually, in other words place a burden on the government to build more residential buildings in order to serve the living needs of workers. Take Hanoi as an example, because of the growth in residents who mostly came from the countrysides, the government had to convert some infrastructures into social houses for employees. In addition, people are prone to suffer from many mental health problems such as depression, autism, … as they have no one to share their stress in their daily life.

In conclusion,the factors behind the trend of living alone tend to be inadequate incomes or characteristics of jobs .The effects may include difficulties in house construction and mental issues.



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In contemporary life, people are becoming more independent in both work and life, (That does not make sense. If people are independent, they make their own decisions about everything they do.) which led (wrong from. Your sentence is present tense. It is wrong to switch to past tense.) to the mounting in individual (That makes no sense. A mounting is similar to a picture frame. It supports an object when you want to hang it on a wall. ) living separately. Although some argue that this tendency brings more positive than negative influences on society than their negative, (wrong word order) I believe living alone can entirely have adverse effects on social development. I can identify two main causes, and two broad effects, which we will describe now. (Do not tell the reader what you are going to write. That is bad form. Do not mention your essay or your writing.)

Perhaps the main cause is limited financial resources . (spacing error. Do not put a space before a period or comma.) This can be seen in the constant rise of the in average cost to own a house containing enough rooms for many people to live together, (comma splice error, ungrammatical sentence.) indeed, most average or low incomes these days are inadequate / too small / not enough impossible (wrong word. It does not make sense) to pay for a large house. For example, almost all blue collar employees receive low salaries ,which (the salaries? Your sentence is not grammatical.) and are just able to make end meets (wrong words) with small accommodation. Additionally, jobs in diverse fields involved (wrong form) different work schedules working time, (wrong form, wrong word) meaning that people want to have their own pace of life (I don't know what you mean.) instead of concerning (wrong verb form) about others difference.

Turning to the negative effects, living individually, in other words places a burden on the government to build more residential buildings in order to have enough housing for everyone. serve the living needs of workers. Take Hanoi as an example, (comma splice error, ungrammatical sentence.) because of the growth in residents who mostly came from the countrysides, (wrong form. Countryside is non-count.) the government had to convert some infrastructures (wrong word. Infrastructure is non-count. Infrastructure is hospitals, airports, highways and roads, electric wires, water and sewer systems, and transportation networks. These are public facilities shared and used by everyone. ) into social houses for employees. In addition, people are prone to suffer from many mental health problems such as depression, autism, (Do not use ellipses, "etc." or phrases such as "and so on" in essays. Also, autism is incorrect. Autism results from a genetic defect that babies are born with. It is not a condition that adults can develop.) as they have no one to share their stress in their daily life.

In conclusion,the factors behind the trend of living alone tend to be inadequate incomes or characteristics of jobs .The effects may include difficulties in house construction and mental issues.

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