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(Teacher comments on research paper)

The writer included too many direct quotations in her paper( 260 words out of 600). Even though she placed quotatons marks, I think she plagiarized her paper. Also, her paper is too short and failed to meet the required number of words(1000 words). That's why I think she deserves an F.
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The writer included too many direct quotations in her paper( 260 words out of 600). Even though she placed quotatons marks, I think she plagiarized her paper. Also, her paper is too short and failed to meet the required number of words(1000 words). That's why I think she deserves an F.
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The writer included too many direct quotations in her paper ( 260 words out of 600). Even though she employed quotation marks, I think she plagiarized (??)her paper. Also, her paper is too short and failed to meet the required number of words(1000 words) .That's why I think she deserves a F.
The writer included too many direct quotations in her paper (260 words out of 600). Even though she employed quotation marks, I think she plagiarized someone else's paper. Also, her paper is too short and failed to meet the required number of words (1000 words) .That's why I think she deserves an F.