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Most evenings I’d drop into one of the beach restaurants to enjoy my favorite meal of spiced fish, fried potatoes, mangos, and bananas with honey (about $4). Then cold beer and trading stories with local people and other travelers.

Are the bolded words an incomplete sentence? Hpw would you correct it?

Thanks in advance.
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Hi,

Most evenings I’d drop into one of the beach restaurants to enjoy my favorite meal of spiced fish, fried potatoes, mangos, and bananas with honey (about $4). Then cold beer and trading stories with local people and other travelers.

Are the bolded words an incomplete sentence? Yes.

How would you correct it? In this informal style, it doesn't really need to be corrected. However, you could say

Then I drank cold beer and traded stories with local people and other travelers.

Best wishes, Clive
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Then (I'd) have cold beer and trade stories with local people and other travellers.