Some people argue that the green movement must take action on global warming by ensuring that all countries have to reduce the dependence on fossil fuels., I totally agree with this view.

To begin with, it is a good idea to explain why people should use alternative energy instead of fossil fuels such as renewable energy. To illustrate, some industries using fossil fuels have a tendency to discharge chemical waste into the environment such as a river, soil, which directly lead to habitat destruction. To make the matters worse, many species are on the brink of extinction which is caused by ecological crisis. Moreover, some renewable energy such as wind, water, and sun can not be exhausted and can be replaced by planting trees for energy, providing a reasonable and safe source of energy for people.

On the other hand, a wide variety of wind farms and solar panels are built and installed to ensure that providing electricity for people all around the world. It is not only environmentally friendly but it also saves a huge amount of budget. To illustrate this, a huge number of families installed cutting-edge equipment like solar panels to serve daily routine activities such as cooking, taking care for the garden, and so on. Furthermore, using alternative energy sources will help people fight climate change causing ozone layer depletion due to the deterioration of the environment.

To sum up, I believe the way people take advantage of using natural resources instead of fossil fuels is good to some extent given above, and I am totally convinced by the argument.

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Your did not copy the essay prompt precisely: The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce consumption of fossil fuel (gas and oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Some people argue that the green movement (That was not in the essay prompt. ) must take action on global warming (That was not in the essay prompt. ) by ensuring that all countries have to reduce the dependence (That was not in the essay prompt. ) on fossil fuels., (Paraphrase, but do not interpret the meaning of the instructions. Do that in the body of your essay. ) I totally agree with this view.

To begin with, it is a good idea to explain why people should use alternative energy, especially renewable energy sources, instead of fossil fuels such as renewable energy. (This is placed incorrectly.) To illustrate this, some industries using fossil fuels have a tendency to discharge chemical waste into the environment such as a river, soil, which directly lead (wrong form) to habitat destruction. (That makes no sense. If they used wind or solar energy to make their products,, they still would discharge the chemical waste. ) To make the matters worse, many species are on the brink of extinction which is caused by ecological crisis. Moreover, some renewable energy sources such as wind, water, and sun can not be exhausted and can be replaced by planting trees for energy, providing a reasonable and safe source of energy for people.

On the other hand, a wide variety of wind farms and solar panels are built and installed to ensure a supply of that providing electricity for people all around the world. It is not only environmentally friendly but it also saves a huge large amount of money budget. (wrong word - a budget is a list of categories that you are going to spends money on, and an estimated amount for each.) To illustrate this, a huge number of many families installed cutting-edge equipment like solar panels to serve daily routine activities such as cooking, taking care for the garden, and washing clothes.. and so on. (Do not use ellipses, "etc." or phrases such as "and so on" in formal essays. Complete your thought.) Furthermore, using alternative energy sources will help people fight climate change causing ozone layer depletion (Ozone depletion is not related to fossil fuels or climate change. It is caused by the chlorine in chlorofluorocarbons.) due to the deterioration of the environment.

To sum up, I believe the way people take advantage of using natural resources instead of fossil fuels is good to some extent given above, and I am totally convinced by the argument. (That is off-topic. It is about the international community taking some actions to encourage nations to reduce their use of fossil fuels. You did not mention the international community in your essay, but it is key to the topic.)

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