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I would like to express something like this:

My work shortened the length of production and was crucial for putting the product into the market.

Could you please help me make it sound better? The modification is at your disposal, please just make sure to keep the similar meaning. Thanks a lot.

BBSER
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That statement is correct as is.
You could also say "The length of production at my job was shortened which in turn put the product on the market immediately; something crucial for ..."
Thanks, LisaM. Welcome to this forum. Emotion: smile

LisaMThat statement is correct as is.You could also say "The length of production at my job was shortened which in turn put the product on the market immediately; something crucial for ..."