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I was coming at dawn, walking my way back home. The quiet of the world was wondrous to behold. During the journey, I saw the dragonfly-blue stream coiled through the forest, thrumming through the vale. Is is the veins of the forest to witness nature's sights and sounds in the glory of the morning. At the centre of the forest, the water was shimmering like sprinkled stardust, purring and purling. It flowed with the grace of ripping satin. Its languorous passage was blocked by the moss-slick rocks. Doves were gliding on the water like boats on the sea. Pebbles were tumbling through the glassy water. The perfume from the roses glided to my nose. It was very pleasant.

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Yes, it's natural. Reconsider this: Is is the veins of the forest to witness nature's sights and sounds in the glory of the morning.

Maybe use "wafted" instead of "glided," though you may prefer "glided."

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I was coming at dawn, walking my way back home. The quiet of the world was wondrous to behold. During the journey, I saw the dragonfly-blue stream coiled through the forest, thrumming through the vale. It is the veins of the forest to witness nature's sights and sounds in the glory of the morning. At the centre of the forest, the water was shimmering like sprinkled stardust, purring and purling. It flowed with the grace of ripping satin. Its languorous passage was blocked by the moss-slick rocks. Doves were gliding on the water like boats on the sea. Pebbles were tumbling through the glassy water. The perfume from the roses wafted to my nose. It was very pleasant.