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Is this short dialog natural and grammatical? Do I need quotation marks within the old man's second line of dialog?

Old man - You people are shameless!

Bad guy - Who said that? Who said that? Was it you? Did you say something, old man?

Old man - I said you people are shameless.

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anonymousIs this short dialog natural and grammatical?

Yes.

anonymousDo I need quotation marks within the old man's second line of dialog?

No.

CJ