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Can you please check if there is any wrong in my writing? I'm really appreciated.

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We go playing badminton just for fun not for beating the opponents. We used to laugh a lot when someone did a bad shot. Then came some new guys who gave me advice such as how to hold the racket, how to smash.blab.blab... and some sneered at my hits. Playing with those people definitely has no fun at all, and the game will be getting nervously,. Smart people don't give advice when not necessary, and of course don't sneer at others, for as they know that in comparison to Tien Minh or other badminton athletes, they play like monkeys.

It doesn't matter how well you play something. But it does matter how funny you play it.

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We play badminton just for fun, and not to beat our opponents.

We used to laugh a lot when someone made a bad shot. Then came some new guys who gave me such advice as how to hold the racket, how to smash, etc, and some of them sneered at my efforts. Playing with those people definitely was no fun at all, and the games became uncomfortable. Good people don't give unnecessary advice and of course don't sneer at others, for they know that in comparison to Tien Minh or other badminton athletes, they themselves play like monkeys.

It doesn't matter how well you play a game, but it does matter how much fun you play it with.
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Fantastic! I am so glad receiving your reply, I am really grateful for your help. I have learned a lot from your correction. You have encouraged my English study.

Thanks again.