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Hi,

Is "increased" the correct word in the context below? Any other correction needed?

"In this study, noise annoyance among individuals was significantly different before and after the educational intervention (p = 0.012). The increased sensitivity is likely to be caused by the increased attitude and knowledge.


Thanks!

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gillyflowerThe increased sensitivity is likely to be caused by the increased improved attitude and increased knowledge.
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gillyflowerThe increased sensitivity

That's fine.

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gillyflowerthe increased attitude

That's unnatural. What do you mean by it?

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teechrThat's unnatural. What do you mean by it?

I mean "improved".

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