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Mike steps into the living room and looks around, when suddenly Jess barges out from behind a curtain, past Mike, knocking him to the floor, and flees into the kitchen.

1) Can you barge out from behind a curtain?

2) Is it clear that Mike is knocked to the floor because Jess barges past him and not because she punches him or anything?

3) Anything else you would change?

Thank you a lot.

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anonymous1) Can you barge out from behind a curtain?

Yes, but it is not ideal.

anonymous2) Is it clear that Mike is knocked to the floor because Jess barges past him and not because she punches him or anything?

That is the picture I get, but you could be more explicit.

anonymous3) Anything else you would change?

Everybody writes differently. If you want my advice, you will describe the action more explicitly.