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- So is this OK for a formal e-mail? I've never ever before written - please if you find any kind of mistakes, anything that bothers you - please tell me and help me correct it - it is very important for me to do it right...
And I'm sorry for the stars, I just try to control my personal info on the net.
Thank you, Lora
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My main comment is that you need to write in paragraphs, like this. I've also made a number of other changes for you to consider.
Dear Ms *** ,
I have recently applied for the Undergraduate Bachelor Program in Intercultural Business Administration at Lauder Business School, and for a scholarship, for the 2009 fall term. With this e-mail I would like to inform you that I sent the required documents by a courier firm on 20. 02. 2009 and I expect them to arrive at the destination on 23. 03. 2009.
For safety's sake, I am sending you as attached files another set of the required documents, in electronic format as “.jpg” and as “.pdf” files.
I hope that everything is in order with my application. If not, or if you have questions, I would be very obliged if you would contact me in the way you prefer. I would also be very relieved if you could confirm to me that my application sent by courier has been received.
I would also like to express via this e-mail my strong wish for the interview date to be on 11. 03. 2009, if that is possible.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.
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