Is This As Natural As I Can Write It?

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Hi. Is this as natural as I can write it?

The man stepped dangerously close to the edge of the building and everybody feared that he was going to jump.

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I'd include 'the roof'.

The man on the roof of the building stepped dangerously close to the edge and everybody feared that he was going to jump.

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