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is this paragraph correct or is there better way to rewrite this.
our company had a meeting last week, we had to demonstrate our product, everything went according to plan, but in the end on modlue was not working, that was the last thing we didn't want.

thanks in advance
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Hi,

our company had a meeting last week, we had to demonstrate our product, everything went according to plan, but in the end on modlue was not working, that was the last thing we didn't want.

Our company had a meeting last week. We had to demonstrate our product. Everything went according to plan, but in the end one module was not working. That was the last thing we wanted.

You can't just put everything in one long sentence by putting commas every so often.

Please also note that capital letters are an important part of English writing.

Best wishes, Clive

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No negative. As Clive says, That was the last thing we wanted. The word last already gives the idea that we didn't want it, it was what we wanted least.
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ok Clive
the last sentences should be like this.
That was the last thing we didn't want
thanks
i think last sentence go liskethis way.
That was the last thing we didn't want.
is it ok

thanks
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