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Topic from teacher : There are 5 skills a person must learn in order to play guitar

..(indent)...If someone wants to be famous, the word of advice from up-to-date hipsters tend to be " Go and get a guitar ".But before a capable novice becomes a true musician, there are 5 skills must have been accomplished.First, set up an obviously ultimate goal for yourself. Next, work hard on listening every single attempts.Third, using precise fingers when playing notes or chords. After that, review and improve overall performances as much as posible. Lastly, try to be an open-minded listener to create a widely strong vision in the world of music. After learning all these skills, a person will become a better guitar player definitely.

Are there all grammatically correct ?

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If someone wants to be famous, the word of advice from up-to-date hipsters tends to be: "Go and get a guitar." But before a capable novice becomes a true musician, there are 5 skills which must have been accomplished. First, set up an obvious and ultimate goal for yourself. Next, work hard on listening to every single attempt on the instrument. Third, use precise fingering when playing single notes or chords. After that, review and improve overall performances as much as possible. Lastly, try to be an open-minded listener, to create an expansive and strong vision in the world of music. After learning these skills, a person will become a better guitar player, definitely.

Are there any grammatical corrections to be made?
Thank you.