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”My story begins in France, where I moved in 1985 to study.”

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Adverbial phrases for time usually go at the end, or beginning.

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/about-adjectives-and-adverbs/adverbs-and-adverb-phrases-position

anonymousMy story begins in France, where I moved in 1985 to study in 1985.”
anonymous”My story begins in 1985 in France, where I moved in 1985 to study.”

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