Is This Sentence Grammatically Correct?

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Kevin told his men to cover the hole with branches and leaves to hide it so that their enemies would fall down into the trap.

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Yes, but I would be inclined to put a comma after "hide it".

Stylistically the "to ... to" repetition is very slightly awkward in my opinion, but this is an advanced stylistic point.

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