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The teacher was reproaching student in front of class.

I told my friend "She said our paperwork are tawdry. Bad design (the paperwork was about drawing and colouring a mind-mapping)"


(It's peculiar that there is still this kind of childish-nursery assignment in a secondary school)

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The words 'reproach' and 'tawdry' are not natural in spoken English.

I suggest this.

The teacher was telling off a student in front of the class.

I told my friend "She said our work is poor. The page we were working on was badly designed (the work was drawing and colouring a mind-mapping)."


(It's peculiar that there is still this kind of childish-nursery assignment in a secondary school.)