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I think the header section could be improved, for instance making the menu bar stick at the top of the page which would improve the accessibility of the page because it saves the user from scrolling back to the top to access a different section.

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I put it in better words, which one of the two sounds more natural.


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I think the header could be improved, for instance, making the menu stick at the top of the page would improve the accessibility because it saves the user from scrolling back to top of the page to access a different section.


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I think the header could be improved, for instance, making the menu stick at the top of the page would improve the accessibility because it would save the user from scrolling back to top of the page for accessing a different section.