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When asked to transfer abroad, many company workers choose to leave their families behind and start living alone in a new environment.
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teacherJapan When asked to transfer abroad, many company workers choose to leave their families behind and start living alone in a new environment.

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teacherJapanWhen asked to transfer abroad, many company workers choose to leave their families behind and start living alone in a new environment.

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