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I would like to know if this host family letter makes sense and if it has a good grammar, please feel free to correct my mistakes.

Dear host family: My name is __ and I am __ years old. I am so excited for this opportunity, I can't wait to learn about Ireland and its culture. I have never been in something similar and I am so thankful you are hosting me. About me, I have three siblings and I was born in the north of Spain, Galicia. I am curious and a good student. In my spare time I enjoy dancing, watching films and listening to music. Since April I have been doing football. I don't know what I want to be when I grow up, but I am sure I want to keep travelling, I believe it is a good way to meet new people and open your mind. I like to eat chinese food, but anyway I am open to everything! I would like to know what's the weather like at night and if you have a WI-FI. Thank you again for hosting me.

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I would like to know if this letter to a host family letter makes sense and if it has a good is grammatical. Please feel free to correct my mistakes.

Dear host family,

My name is __, and I am __ years old. I am so excited for by this opportunity, and I can't wait to learn about Ireland and its culture. I have never been in something similar done this before, and I am so thankful you are offering to host ing me.

About me, I have three siblings, and I was born in the north of Spain, in Galicia. I am a curious person and a good student. In my spare time, I enjoy dancing, watching films and listening to music. Since April, I have been doing playing football. I don't know what I want to be when I grow up, but I am sure I want to keep travelling. I believe it is a good way to meet new people and open your broaden one’s mind. I like to eat enjoy Chinese food, but anyway I am open to everything!

I would like to know what the weather is like at night in August and if you have WI-FI.

Thank you again for offering to host ing me.

Yours faithfully,

Juan Sanchez

Comments  
Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?

Thank you! I really appreciate your corrections

teechrYours faithfully,

But, isn't this too formal? What about sincerely me?

Thank you again

anonymousBut, isn't this too formal?

It's formal, but not too formal. You still don't know those people well enough, so it's not inappropriate.

anonymousWhat about sincerely me?

No.

I think it should be "Wi-Fi".
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