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Amendment ot existing first Mortgage and Security Agreement dated April 6, 1998 (the
"First Mortgage") on 385 & 399 Broadway, Lynnfield, MA. 01940 ("the Mortgaged Property") including all buildings, improvements, and fixtures located thereon. (Satisfactory legal description must be provided to DCS's legal counsel)
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The second word should be OF not 'ot'
It appears correct to me but then again I'm not a lawyer. They can always find something wrong with it. Don't quote me on this...Ask a lawyer just in case.
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Its the 'title' (correct legal term? of a legal document.
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It seems there is no ' verb ' from Amendment .... to thereon. So it is not a complete sentence but only a phrase with more to follow ...
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