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: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :

1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.

2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.

3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.

Hi Lisa

I hope that everything is OK over there. I am a bit busy but it is good. In answer your letter, i have some idea

Firstly, I don’t think you should go to college instead of finding a job. it will take you 4 years to finish your study and we are not sure that you can have a good job after graduate. Recruits does’n concern that you are Batchelor or doctor, they just focus on your abilities, your qualities. So, the degree is not important now if you think it will help you to fine a job.

Secondly, in my opinion, seek for a job is good for you. In 4 years while your friends are still study in college, you have a career, you accumulate more experiences which will aid you more in the future to meet success. Therefore, find a job is a good idea.

As i said before, tourist is a best choice to you due to your enthusiasm and energetic, you will learn more when you travel to some place. I hope this opinion will answer your questions. Considering everything to make a decision.

Love u

Lala

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: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :

1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.

2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.

3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.

Hi Lisa

I hope that everything is OK over there. I am a bit busy but it is good. In answer to your letter, i (wrong word. "i" is the ninth letter of the alphabet. Letters are not people. Letters do not have ideas.) have some idea (wrong form).

Firstly, First,I don’t think you should go to college instead of finding a job. it (wrong capitalization) will take you 4 four years to finish your study and we are not sure that you will get can have a good job after you graduate. Recruits does’n (wrong form). concern (wrong form). that you are Batchelor or doctor, they just focus on your abilities, your qualities. (ungrammatical series) So, the degree is not important now if you think it will help you to fine (wrong word). a job.

Secondly, Second, in my opinion, seek for (wrong form) a job is good for you. In 4 years while your friends are still study (wrong form). in college, you will have a career, (wrong punctuation, comma splice error, ungrammatical sentence. ) you accumulate more experiences which will aid you more in the future to meet success. Therefore, find (wrong form) a job is a good idea.

As i (wrong word. "i" is the ninth letter of the alphabet. Letters are not people. Letters cannot say things.) said before, tourist (wrong word - tourists are people on holiday. They are not working.) is a best choice to you due to your enthusiasm and energetic, (wrong word you will learn more when you travel to some place. I hope this opinion will answer your questions. Considering everything to make a decision.

Love u

Lala