Hello all,

I really appreciate if somenone would help me correcting my letter for a job application. Thank you very much.

Dear Sir(s),

I am writing to apply for the position of Supply Manager as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.

I appreciate challenges and I consider myself able and extremely motivated. I am a results-orientated marketer with proven success in the planning and delivery of effective marketing strategies and activities. My strong professional background is a result of eight years work experience, both as an employee and as a free-lancer consultant. As free-lancer I worked with companies from a wide scope of activity sectors. Hence, I had amplified considerably my experience and empower my professional vision. I believe to possess the essential adjectives towards success: professional, dynamic, autonomous, social and dedicated. I have excellent organisational and technical skills and I truly believe in teamwork. I easily adapt to new environments and I am proud of my flexibility and easiness to learn despite being a woman of strong moral and firm principles.

I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for an interview any weekday to better expose my arguments. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,
JP

Hello, JP.

It is very well-written grammatically, but also very boring-- it uses all the cliches and stock phrases that cover letters are prey to. All the self-praise will count for nothing with the potential employer until an interview is held. I would suggest that, while keeping it brief, you eliminate the self-description and supply instead more details about why the company/position interests you and what specific experiences in your background most make your abilities appropriate to what is needed.

Dear Sirs:
I am writing to apply for the position of Supply Manager, as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.

I appreciate challenges and I consider myself able and extremely motivated. I am a results-orientated marketer with proven success in the planning and delivery of effective marketing strategies and activities. My strong professional background is a result of eight years of work experience, both as an employee and as a freelance consultant. As a freelancer, I worked with companies from a wide range of activity sectors. Hence, I have amplified considerably my experience and empowered my professional vision. I believe I possess the essential attributes for success: I am professional, dynamic, autonomous, social and dedicated. I have excellent organisational and technical skills and I truly believe in teamwork. I easily adapt to new environments and I am proud of my flexibility and facility for learning despite being a woman of strong morals and firm principles.

I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for an interview any weekday to better present my credentials. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
Hello,

Thank you very much for your suggestions. As you pointed it seems to me that you are right about the cliches. I will consider that and re-write it.

Kind regards,

JP
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Dear Sir,

Enclosed is my resume in response to your advertisement for an Assistant Statistical Officer in Radio Tuvalu, I hereby forward my application for your perusal and kind consideration please.


I’m a female of 21 years of age and enjoying good health. At the meantime I’m seeking for a job to support my family financially. Also I am very interested in the job and above all.


In terms of my educational background I was educated at Motufoua Secondary School since 2009 – 2012 and reached form 6 levels. In 2013 I attended the Tuvalu Form Seven Programme and I was awarded with certificates. I attended the MKH Typing, Computing and Accounting School since 2014 for a period of six months from July to December and I was awarded with certificates in Computing Microsoft Word and Microsoft Excel, Secretarial Skills and Accounting and Book – Keeping. Due to my work experience, I have worked as a Temporary Economic Adviser at the Planning and Budget Department for a period of six month since 2015. And also now I work as an Account Clerk/ Cashier at the Tuvalu Cooperative Society Ltd (TCS).


I look forward to hearing from you. Should you require further information concerning my application, please do not hesitate to contact me at my email address – Email Removed">Email Removed and telephone number (20642, 20635) – office, or 7004236 – mobile.

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