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Hi,

Is this underlined sentence wrong? Just wrong sentence or does have something in it?

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Even before the iPad was unveiled Wednesday, Hewlett-Packard Co. had showed off a slate computer designed to display printed content and video. Lenovo Group Ltd. in June will begin selling a $999 hybrid device called the IdeaPad U1 that splits into two pieces. Separated, it's a color touchscreen tablet that's good for reading and browsing the Web, and snapped together it becomes a full-power laptop with keyboard. Virginia startup EnTourage Systems Inc. is selling what it calls a "dualbook," a fold-up device with a color touchscreen on one side for Web browsing and a black-and-white screen on the other that's optimized for long-form reading.

Apple Chief Executive Steve Jobs on Wednesday drove home the all-in-one idea that with the iPad. It lets consumers email photos, watch video, listen to music, play games in addition to reading e-books. "In order to really create a new category of devices, those devices are going to have to be far better at doing some key tasks,'' Mr. Jobs said. ``We think we've got the goods. We think we've done it.''

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The sentence is wrong. It is probably a misprint.
"That with the iPad" is a fragment.
Probably meant to say:
"...that with the iPad will let consumers email photos, watch video, etc...."
Thanks a lot, ed_shaw and sorry being late.
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Hi,

"...that with the iPad will let consumers email photos, watch video, etc.."

I hope even the 'with' can be avoided.

Thanks.
Hello,

I feel the sentence is right. Please, it is only for me and I am not trying to thrust it on any one.

Thank you.
pructusApple Chief Executive Steve Jobs on Wednesday drove home the all-in-one idea that with the iPad.
What if we just omitted the "that"?

Wednesday, he drove home the idea of an all-in-one gadget WITH the iPad.
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Hi GG,

Apple Chief Executive Steve Jobs on Wednesday drove home the all-in-one idea that with the iPad.

You are absolutely right, and I am sorry that I didn't notice it.

Thank you very much...........
Hi,

We have to remove the 'the' too...........Am I right?

Thank you.
"The" all-in-one idea - is that that "the" you are referring to? If so, then no, it stays.
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