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Religare was launched in Jan 07, been a new entrant it was struggling for a brand visibility in the highly cluttered financial services sector. NAC Advertising was assigned with the task to make Religare a visible and vibrant brand in the marketplace. NAC launched the Religare campaign on the Budget day in 2007. Every retailer, investor waits for the Budget day to make fresh financial / investment decisions. Hence, launch of Religare campaign on the Budget day was an excellent strategic move. The campaign was launched with multiple innovative activities with a leading business channel to grab the maximum eye balls. The post campaign results, the brand registered in the mind of the target audience successfully with the high brand recall. The campaign created top of the mind awareness for Regilare brand.
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Religare was launched in January 2007. As a new entrant, it struggled for brand visibility in the highly cluttered financial services sector. NAC Advertising was assigned the task to make Religare a visible and vibrant brand in the marketplace. NAC launched the Religare campaign on the Budget day in 2007. Every retailer and investor waits for Budget day to make fresh financial/investement decisions, so the launch of the Religare campaign on that day was an excellent strategic move. The campaign was launched with a leading business channel to reach as many viewers as possible.

According to post-campaign results, the brand was registered in the minds of the target audience successfully with the high brand recall. The campaign created top of the mind awareness for the Regilare brand.

Unless you're going to tell us what the activities are, leave it out. That part makes the sentence awkward and doesn't add anything important to your content. Don't say to grab the maximum eyeballs. That's very awkward construction...and really gross!

The phrase "top of the mind awareness" is awkward too. I would rewrite.
Thanks anonymous to help me out