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Letter question:

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singer was very good. You want to tell him how you feel.

Writ a letter to singer. In your letter

Say how you feel about his performance

Give details of your musical activities

Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities


Dear Camily,

I am writing this letter of appreciation because you did a splendid performance in the concert that was held on Pearl continental last night.

You are blessed with unique vocal qualities which made you prominent yesterday among all the singers. You sang one of my favourite song, which is close to my heart ,in a beautiful way.

I wanted to share that I am also a struggling singer and music has always been my passion since I was a child. I have joined few music classes but they are training me on different areas and not on classical music. I am in dire need to pursue my career in classical singing and I know you can help me on this. Please get back to me when you are able to teach me as I got to know last night that you are a classical music teacher.

Looking forward to hearing you soon

Yours sincerely,

Muna

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muna tigeress You want to tell him how you feel.

Dear Camily, (Camily is a female name. You are supposed to write to a guy.)

I am writing this letter of appreciation because you did a splendid performance in the concert that was held at on Pearl continental last night.

You are blessed with unique vocal qualities which made you stand out prominent yesterday among all the singers. You sang one of my favourite song, (wrong form) which is close to my heart ,in a beautiful way.

I wanted to share that I am also a struggling singer and music has always been my passion since I was a child. I have joined few music classes but they are training me in on different areas but and not on classical music. I am in dire need to pursue my career in classical singing and I know you can help me on this. Please get back to me when you are able to teach me as I came got to know last night that you are a classical music teacher.

Looking forward to hearing you soon

Yours sincerely,

Muna

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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel.

Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:

Say how you feel about his performance.

Give details of your musical activities.

Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Camily, [ Use a standard first name]

I am writing this letter of appreciation because you did put on a splendid performance in the concert that was held on Pearl continental [ What is that supposed to be the name of?] last night.

You are blessed with unique vocal qualities which made you prominent yesterday among all the singers. [ Where there other singers at the concert? If not, amend that part] You sang one of my favourite songs, [ song name?] which is close to my heart, in a beautiful way.

I wanted to share with you that I am also a struggling budding/aspiring singer, and music has always been my passion since I was a child. I have joined a few music classes, but they are training me focused on different areas and not on classical music. I am in dire need to pursue my career in classical singing, and I know you can help me on with this. Please get back to me when you are able to teach me [ What does that mean?] as I got to know last night that you are a classical music teacher.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Muna Murphy

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