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didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented in Azlan Shah Hockey tournament and being in final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have – exciting, energetic, enthusiastic and keenly fought contest. Players gave their 100%, was lucky to get a golden goal in the extra time. Anyways three cheers for Indian Hockey team.
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India didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed, India won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented India in Azlan Shah Hockey Tournament and being in final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have – exciting, energetic, enthusiastic and keenly fought contest. Players gave their 100%, Argentina was lucky to get a golden goal in the extra time. Anyways three cheers for Indian hockey team.
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didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed, won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented at Azlan Shah Hockey Tournament and being in the final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have excitement, energetic, enthusiastic and keenly fought contest. The players had given there 100%, was lucky to get a golden goal in an extra time. Three cheers for the Indian hockey team.