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Indian premier league

Cricket is no more a sports, it’s a business. The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in ) coffer has been overflowing, so where to put the money? Comes the idea from Mr Lalit Modi’s brain, let’s make the rich player even richer. It marked the arrival of ‘Indian Premier League’. Politicians, film stars instantly queued up to grab the larger chunk of the BCCI cash pie. The Indian cricket crazy fans are really crazy they leave their work and get hooked to TV sets to see the matches. Players are earning money at the cost of crazy fans lost working hours.
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Indian premier league

Cricket is no more a sports, it’s a business. The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in India) coffer has been overflowing, so where to put the money? Comes the idea from Mr Lalit Modi’s brain, let’s make the rich player even richer. It marked the arrival of ‘Indian Premier League’. Politicians, film stars instantly queued up to grab the larger chunk of the BCCI cash pie. The Indian cricket crazy fans are really crazy they leave their work and get hooked to TV sets to see the matches. Players are earning money at the cost of crazy fans lost working hours.
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Thanks you sir for underlining the problem areas, it's a best way to improve upon the grammar. I had reworked on the underlined sentences kindly check the following
Indian Premier League Cricket is no more a sport, it’s a business. The BCCI's (Board of Control for Cricket in ) coffer has been overflowing, so where to put the money? The idea comes from Mr Lalit Modi’s brains, let’s make the rich player even richer. It marks the arrival of ‘Indian Premier League’. Politicians and film stars instantly queued up to grab the larger chunk of the BCCI cash pie. The Indian cricket crazy fans are really crazy, they leave their work and get hooked to TV sets to watch the matches. Players are earning money at the cost of the crazy fan’s lost working hours.
Kindly anyone help me with this