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After the Mumbai carnage, the western media highlighted the fact that yet there are no retaliatory attacks or communal riots in the city. The aim of terrorists was to create a divide between Hindus and Muslims, to the contrary it brought them even more closer and magnified the hallmark of Indian identity, unity in diversity. Every one irrespective of religions queued outside hospitals for blood donation. Muslims had snubbed the terrorists in the strongest words said they are not true Muslims and they are just misleading the youths of their community in the name of Jihad. The Muslims clerics said none of the terrorists will be given a place for burial in our country.
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CreativeguruAfter the Mumbai carnage, the western media highlighted the fact that as of yet there are have been no retaliatory attacks or communal riots in the city. The aim of terrorists was to create a divide between Hindus and Muslims. To the contrary, it brought them even more closer and magnified the hallmark of Indian identity, unity in diversity. Everyone, irrespective of religions his* religion (his religious affiliation), queued outside hospitals for blood donation. Muslims had snubbed the terrorists in the strongest words said by saying (that) they are were not true Muslims and they are were just misleading the youths of their community in the name of Jihad. The Muslims clerics said none of the terrorists will would be given a place for burial in our country.

I think the last three verbs sound better in their indirect speech forms.

* Some people woul use "their" here, even though it is plural and everyone is singular.
Thanks BRS for your help it would help me improve my writing.....