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A sweet home you have always dreamt of, away from the mad rush of the city and near to the beauty of nature. At the dawn sun's gloden rays kisses your windows, a shimmering lake to greet you when you open it. Serenity pinches your senses to make you realize that it's not just a home but a haven of paradise. A lush greenery spread across a hundred acres, beautifully planned and landscape terrain. With every breath fresh air spines down your lungs allows you to lead a healthy & happy life.Hosts of facilities to keep boredom at the bay.
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A home you have always dreamt of, away from the mad rush of the city and near the beauty of nature. As the dawn sun kisses your window, a shimmering lake greets you when you open it. This serenity makes you realize that it's not just a home but a haven in Paradise-- lush greenery spread across a hundred acres, a beautifully planned and landscaped terrain. With every breath, fresh air fills your lungs, allowing you to lead a healthy and happy life. And there is a host of facilities to keep boredom at bay.
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This serenity pinches your senses makes you realize that it's not just a home but a haven in paradise.

Is this perfect grammatically sir
No, and it sounds awful too.