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The illustrations of Condom and intra uterine devices, on the very first sight gave an impression of you being an adjuvant to Family Planning Commission, trying to increase the 'couple protection rate' promoting these products. It's a surprise that you also own a company which is working diligently to bring humanity closer by making all gel, jellies and patches. Wish you all the success in this new venture.
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At first sight, the illustrations of condoms and intrauterine devices, on the very first sight gave an impression of you being gave the impression that you were an adjuvant to [This is an odd word to use here. Something like "working for" or "affiliated with" would be better] the Family Planning Commission, trying to increase the 'couple protection rate' promoting these products [I'm not quite sure what you mean by "couple protection rate". You might mean "working to reduce unwanted pregnancies", but that's kind of obvious from the context, so I'm not sure you need it.]. It's a surprise that you also own a company which is working diligently to bring humanity closer [This doesn't sound right; don't really understand what you mean] by making all gel, jellies and patches [What sorts of products are these? Are they unrelated to contraception? It's not all that clear]. I wish you all the every success in this new venture.
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Thanks Wordy for the correction.
It was an attempt to write a satire.
suhaniiThanks Wordy for the correction.
It was an attempt to write a satire.

Oh. You should have mentioned that!