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Dear Teachers,

Is it ok if I write like this ?:

a/The employment agencies concerned abroad are respectfully requested to provide favorable conditions for Mr Smith to get a job suited to his qualifications and capacity so that he can get stable income.

b/The employment agencies concerned abroad are respectfully requested to assign Mr Smith a jo suited to his qualifications and capacityso that he can get stable income .

Thank you in advance
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Thank you Nona the Brit and Clive .

Maybe there is a difference between cultures.In my country , when you would like to ask somebody to do something for you , you have to say in such a way that they feel happy to do something for you although it is their responsibility to do it for you .If you think it is their duty and responsibility to do it for you and no need to talk with them, sometimes they ignore you or if they are forced to do it , they do it in an unhappy state of mind.

I wonder whether you two have any other ways to help me resolve this problem.

Best wishes
Hi,

It would help us if you could explain more precisely why this person needs you to write a letter and what he is going to do with it after you have given it to him.

Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Clive.

The man asked me to translate this confirmation letter for him because he is going to work as a guess worker in Malaysia under the cooperative program between Vietnam and Malaysia .The Malaysian side demands such a letter as a form of formality . Without this confirmation letter , he cannot receive help from Malaysian Labour Using Agency ( Sorry I don't know whether "Labour Using Agency" is the accurate translation . I would be very happy if you could help me the accurate word for it )when he arrives there although ,according to the cooperative agreement ,it is the Malaysian side's duty to help arrange a suitable job for him .

My English is terrible so it sounds too lengthy .Hopefully you will catch what I really mean .

Best wishes
Hi,

Ah, I see. Govt. agencies are a bit different.

Perhaps The Ministry of Labour of Malaysia is requested to assist Mr. Smith in finding a well-paid job suited to his qualifications and capabilities.

Best wishes, Clive

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Thank you ever so much Clive[8]
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