I was recently requested by a recruitment agency to provide them with my CV, so they will be able to find me a job. I have prepared this CV for that propose.
I highly appreciate if you review my CV and tell me about every kind of errors that I have made from the content to style, even punctuation, address, grammar, vocabulary, use of capital letters and articles, and every kind suggestion, or whatever you think about it.
Many thanks again for your invaluable feedbacks and assistance.

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. XXX Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

Email Removed

SUMMARY

A highly motivated, determined, and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner (GP) with practical work experience in conducting evidence based medicine during my 16th month compulsory national service, when I was working as a GP in a health clinic handling most aspects of a GP responsibilities. My appreciation for importance of “ evidence based medicine” has led me to propose surveys and researches to gather appropriate data concerning most daily encountered medical problems. My commitment to humanitarian activities and my professional obligations led to a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent during the very first days of catastrophic xx earthquake ( date), when I experienced working with the least equipment and facilities during a natural disaster of massive number of casualties and lots of emergencies. I spent two month of my internship and one month of my clerkship in a rural health clinic where I became familiar with the the country health system and policies in rural area while under supervision I was responsible for daily patient care and visits, handling and updating patients records, doing patients follow-ups, vaccination, pregnancy and pediatric routine cares, birth control, consultation, monitoring community health and addressing any health problem in the community. I proposed a survey during this invaluable experience of my internship to find out the results of failure of patient for following up their routing visits especially for pregnant women and juvenile’s which resulted in 23 percent increase in their attendance. The rest of my internship was in a large medical center in xxx city during which we were trained for conducting a wide array of medical skills in all medical disciplines. I understand the value of research in medicine and have always been keen to conduct practical researches to solve some problems of community or bring new treatment to practice, which could be noticed from my research background. I have always been eager to connect my current knowledge to perpetual stream of new medical breakthroughs and practices through reading reputable medical journals, however my research background makes me to be critical to new article and research papers form content and methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork and to be more proficient in indispensable art of time management. I studied medicine in and graduated from a medical school listed in both WHO and IMED directory of medical schools.

WORK EXPERIENCE

XXX Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)

As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683

Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Name of University XXX Branch, Town, City, Country (23 September 1997 - August, 2005)
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: XXX association with XXX Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)
  • Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 – 25 August 2005)
  • Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)
First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 – June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 – June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 – present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Language
IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (2006 - present)

Clinical

Experienced in: Evidence-Based Clinical Practice, IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube insertion (NGT).
Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Name of University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

Name of Youth Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

VOLUNTEER WORK

XX Earthquake, Town, City, Country.
Name of Red Crescent Organization (200-)
Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken name of town, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services.

HONORS and AWARDS

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 200-)
Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (September, 200-)
Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among xx University All branches Nationwide.

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer.
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Hi,

I'm afraid I don't have time to look in detail right now, but a general first comment is that your summary and work experiences are much too wordy. They should be in point form, with lots of white space.

Best wishes, Clive
Hi Clive,

Yes, I agree that my summary is too long, Shall I eliminate it and instead write a cover letter?
Is this summary suitable to be a cover letter? Do I need a cover letter for a recruiting agency afterall?
What about the rest of CV?

Thank you very mauch for your reply and kind remarks.
Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?
Hi,

Yes, I agree that my summary is too long, Shall I eliminate it and instead write a cover letter? I would just make it shorter and in point form. Think of it as a chance to highlight your strengths.


Is this summary suitable to be a cover letter? You could use parts of it, but focus on the purpose of a cover letter.

Say what job/kind of job you want

Introduce yourself and your skills briefly, in terms of why people should choose you for this job.

Ask for an interview or whatever action you want the agency to take



Do I need a cover letter for a recruiting agency after all? I don't know. I think it's probably a good idea.

What about the rest of CV? I've added a few comments.

There are also books etc. available that give sample CV's for professional people. Have you had a chance to look at such things? You should.

Best wishes, Clive

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

[email protected]



SUMMARY

A highly motivated, determined, and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner (GP) with practical work experience in conducting evidence based medicine during my 16th month compulsory national service, when I was working as a GP in a health clinic handling most aspects of a GP responsibilities. My appreciation for importance of “ evidence based medicine” has led me to propose surveys and researches to gather appropriate data concerning most daily encountered medical problems. My commitment to humanitarian activities and my professional obligations led to a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent during the very first days of catastrophic *** earthquake ( date), when I experienced working with the least equipment and facilities during a natural disaster of massive number of casualties and lots of emergencies. I spent two month of my internship and one month of my clerkship in a rural health clinic where I became familiar with the the country health system and policies in rural area while under supervision I was responsible for daily patient care and visits, handling and updating patients records, doing patients follow-ups, vaccination, pregnancy and pediatric routine cares, birth control, consultation, monitoring community health and addressing any health problem in the community. I proposed a survey during this invaluable experience of my internship to find out the results of failure of patient for following up their routing visits especially for pregnant women and juvenile’s which resulted in 23 percent increase in their attendance. The rest of my internship was in a large medical center in *** city during which we were trained for conducting a wide array of medical skills in all medical disciplines. I understand the value of research in medicine and have always been keen to conduct practical researches to solve some problems of community or bring new treatment to practice, which could be noticed from my research background. I have always been eager to connect my current knowledge to perpetual stream of new medical breakthroughs and practices through reading reputable medical journals, however my research background makes me to be critical to new article and research papers form content and methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork and to be more proficient in indispensable art of time management. I studied medicine in and graduated from a medical school listed in both WHO and IMED directory of medical schools.

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)

As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts. Put it all in point form. Don't tell it like a story. eg

- responsible for this

- did that

- supervised these staff

- performed this kind of surgery

- etc. etc.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683
.
Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617


EDUCATION

Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country (23 September 1997 - August, 2005)
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)


  • Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 – 25 August 2005)
  • Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)


  • First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
    Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

    Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 – June, 1996)

    Pre-University Diploma
    Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

    Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 – June, 1995)
    High School Diploma
    Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

    Very often, people with advanced degrees omit info about lesser things like High School.


    Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 – present)
    Researcher no. 23679



    SKILLS

    Language
    IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

    TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

    French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (2006 - present)


    Clinical

    Experienced in: Evidence-Based Clinical Practice, IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube insertion (NGT).
    Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering


    Research

    Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

    Computer

    Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

    Sports

    Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

    5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

    Name of University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

    Name of Youth Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)


    VOLUNTEER WORK

    *** Earthquake, Town, City, Country.
    Name of Red Crescent Organization (200-)
    Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken name of town, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services.


    HONORS and AWARDS

    3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 200-)
    Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

    Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (September, 200-)
    Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among *** University All branches Nationwide.


    PERSONAL INTERESTS

    Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer.
Hi Clive
Thank you very much for your invaluable remarks.
As you mentioned I wrote the summary and work experince in point form and made them shorter.

Would you kindly give me your feedback about the revised edition below:

Ictually mos of my knowledge of writing a cv comes from the net. I have aslo read a couple of sample cv's in oxfored commercial correspondence book.

Best Regards,

Summary

A highly motivated and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner, graduated from a medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories, worked as a GP for 16th month compulsory national service in an *** health clinic. Appreciates the importance of “evidence based medicine”, executed surveys to collect needed data for this propose during my carrier. Committed to humanitarian activities with a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent, *** earthquake (Date). Three months internship and clerkship in a rural health clinic gave me insight into health care system in a rural area while implemented a survey to find out the reasons registered patients failed to follow up their routine visits, with a consequent 23 percent increase in the number of routine visits. Enthusiastic to conduct researches and bring more efficient treatments to practice. Determined to connect my learned medical knowledge to perpetual stream of medical updates through reading medical journals, while being critical to their content from methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork.

Wok Experience
*** Health Clinic, place (2006 - 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)

For after-graduation compulsory National Service, served in the above health clinic as a GP, handling primary health care issues, emergency settings, psychiatric cases, executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, drug prescription, requesting x rays and labs, referring to higher medical centers and specialties. Implemented problem-oriented researches to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management, resulted in executing preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, and headache overall by 27 percent. Worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, responsible for monitoring their work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education ( 2007)
Permanent Medical Practice Certificate n.***

Medical Council (December, 2005)
Medical Council no. ***

Ministry of Health and Medical Education ( 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no
Hi,

As you mentioned I wrote the summary and work experince in point form and made them shorter.

Would you kindly give me your feedback about the revised edition below:

It's usual to begin with a short 'OBJECTIVE section eg


OBJECTIVE

To obtain a position as a family doctor in a rural area.

Summary

Just put stuff that you really think will help you to get the reader's attention, and make him/her say 'Gee, I should interview this person'.

Put your points on separate lines,e g

- Highly motivated and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner

- graduated from a medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories

- Appreciate the importance of “evidence based medicine”, executed surveys to collect needed data for this

Committed to humanitarian activities with a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent

etc, etc. Don't put everything, choose the highlights. Focus on what you are/what you can do, not on what you did


Work Experience
*** Health Clinic, place (2006 - 2007)
Put dates in left margin
General Practitioner (GP)
Again, point form !!! Put your basic duties plus the important stuff. Not any trivia.




- served in the above health clinic as a GP, handling primary health care issues, emergency settings, psychiatric cases, executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, drug prescription, requesting x rays and labs, referring to higher medical centers and specialties.

- Implemented problem-oriented researches to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management, resulted in executing preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, and headache overall by 27 percent.

- Worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, responsible for monitoring their work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.



Post again, if you like
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Hi Clive,

Thanks a lot for your realy precious feedback and time.

As you mentioned I made some major changes to the resume.I'd like to post it again.

please let me know how you think about this one

SUMMARY
  • A highly motivated and dedicated recognized for excelling doctor-patient communicational skills
  • Superior diagnostic skills and treatment planning with high appreciation for executing evidence-based medicine
  • Adept at a wide array of clinical procedures and skills
  • Outstanding research abilities - enthusiastic to implement researches and surveys to institute more comprehensive health care in the work environment
  • Effective decision-making and problem solving skills in highly stressful environments
  • A team-player – work in harmony with other medical staff and patient family to ensure best individually-based patient management
  • Committed to humanitarian activities with a two-week voluntary work in catastrophic Bam earthquake
  • Deep insight into and exposure to working environment and requirement of rural areas
  • Determined to connect learned medical knowledge to perpetual stream of medical updates, while being critical to them from content and methodology perspectives
  • Full of praise for sports – skillful basketball player – proficient with team work and time management
  • Medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories
  • IELTS score: 7.5-Computer literate
WORK EXPERIENCE AND QUALIFICATIONS

2006 – 2007 x Health Clinic, City, country

General Practitioner (GP)

Compulsory National Service

Delivered primary health care services - executed comprehensive patient management - dealt with emergency settings - carried out general medical procedures - provided full medical and psychiatric consultation

Devised problem-oriented researches to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management with consequent institution of preventive and educational measures resulted in 27 percent reduction in most daily encountered complaints

Delivered lectures about the most common and important health issues for the staff

Worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, responsible for monitoring their work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts

June, 2007 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Permanent Medical Practice Certificate no. x

December, 2005 Medical Council,

Medical Council no. x

December, 2005 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no. x

EDUCATION

23 September 1997 - August, 2005 Name of University XXX Branch, Town, City, Country
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: XXX association with XXX Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)
  • Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 – 25 August 2005)
  • Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)
Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 – present)
Researcher no. 23679

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 2003)
Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 – June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

PUBLICATIONS

European Conference, city, country (October, 2007)

Iron Deficiency association with …

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, city, country (December, 2004)

Moderate Physical Activity in Female Amateur Athletes and Insomnia

SKILLS

Language

IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (July 2006 - present)

Clinical

Excellent doctor – patient communicational skills, knowledgeable in conducting evidence based medicine

Experienced in IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube (NGT) insertion

Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, experienced with research proposition and making and reviewing proposals, Teamwork conscious

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus, Familiar with Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

VOLUNTEER WORK

x Earthquake, city, country Red Crescent Organization (2004)

Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken Bam, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services

AWARDS AND ACCOMPLELISHMENTS

health Clinic, city, country (2006 -2007)

Honor praise because of the outstanding accomplishments and services during 16 month work period

Devised local research and survies, promoted health care system, fostered evidence based medicine practice

health Clinic, city, country (February 2007)

Internship in above rural area resulted in implementing a survey to sorting out the reasons for registered patient to fail to follow-up their routine scheduled visits – Subsequent 23 percent attendance increase

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers city, country (2004)

Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity …

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (2003)

Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among university all branches Nationwide

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Isfahan University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

X Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer

Referees and Supporting Documentation Furnished upon Request
Hi,

Put your personal info at the top (eg name/address/phone/email)

You need an Objective section - what kind of job do you want?

SUMMARY

yes, bullets (black dots) are great

I'm going to comment and also make some suggested wording changes

But I'm not a doctor.Emotion: wink

Clive

  • Highly motivated and dedicated, with excellent patient communications
  • Superior diagnostic skills and treatment planning, utilizing evidence-based medicine (speak about diagnostic skills?)
  • Adept at wide array of clinical procedures and skills
  • Outstanding research abilities - eager to do more research on comprehensive health care in the work environment (does this mean you want a job thatinvolves research?)
  • Effective decision-maker, with problem solving skills in highly stressful environments
  • Team-player – able to work well with other medical staff and patient families to ensure quality and individualized patient management
  • Committed to humanitarian, volunteer activities
  • Excellent familiarity with medical needs of rural areas (does this mean your objective is a rural job?)
  • Dedicated to keeping medical skills current, while still critically evaluating new ideas
  • Medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories (talk about yourself,not your school)
  • Computer literate (familiar with any medical or patient related software?)


  • WORK EXPERIENCE AND QUALIFICATIONS

    2006 – 2007 x Health Clinic, City, country

    General Practitioner (GP)

    Compulsory National Service



    use bullet points again



    Provided care as needed for a regiment ? 999 people?: delivered primary health care services, executed comprehensive patient management, dealt with field emergencies, carried out general medical procedures, provided full medical and psychiatric consultation



    Devised problem-oriented research to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management with consequent institution of preventive and educational measures resulted in 27 percent reduction these kinds of figures and quantities are great in most daily encountered complaints



    Delivered lectures about most common and important health issues for the staff what staff? other doctors?



    Managed three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistants, monitored their work, coordinated personnel, scheduled night shifts



    June, 2007 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

    Permanent Medical Practice Certificate no. x



    December, 2005 Medical Council,

    Medical Council no. x



    December, 2005 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

    Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no. x



    EDUCATION

    Don't put the months, not important 23 September 1997 - August, 2005 Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country
    Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
    Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
    Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00) I don't think you need to put grades


    • Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 – 25 August 2005)
    • Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)


    • Research X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 – present)
      Researcher no. 23679



      3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 2003)
      Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...



      First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
      Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

      Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 – June, 1996)

      Pre-University Diploma
      Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)



      PUBLICATIONS

      European Conference, city, country (October, 2007)

      Iron Deficiency association with …

      3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, city, country (December, 2004)

      Moderate Physical Activity in Female Amateur Athletes and Insomnia



      SKILLS

      Language I think perhaps you shouldn't put the langage section ??

      IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)



      TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)



      French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (July 2006 - present)



      Clinical

      Excellent doctor – patient communicational skills, knowledgeable in conducting evidence based medicine



      Experienced in IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube (NGT) insertion

      Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering



      Research

      Knowledgeable in research methodology, experienced with research proposition and making and reviewing proposals, Teamwork conscious



      Computer


      Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus, Familiar with Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage



      Sports Perhaps don't put this.

      Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders



      VOLUNTEER WORK

      x Earthquake, city, country Red Crescent Organization (2004)

      Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken Bam, I wouldn't put these capitals >>> Involved in in-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aid Groups and connecting them with Iranian health authorities and services



      AWARDS AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS



      health Clinic, city, country (2006 -2007)

      Award ??? for outstanding accomplishments and services during 16 month work period



      health Clinic, city, country (February 2007)

      Internship in above rural area, implemented a survey to determine reasons why registered patients failed to follow-up their routine scheduled visits – Subsequent 23 percent attendance increase



      3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers city, country (2004)

      Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity …



      Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (2003)

      Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among university all branches nationwide



      5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)



      Isfahan University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)



      X Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)



      PERSONAL INTERESTS Maybe omit this ???

      Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer



      Referees and Supporting Documentation Furnished Upon Request

Hi Clive,

Comparing my first CV to the last one on this page one realizes that there has been significant improvement. It is obvious that this all is because of your invaluable contribution and kind assistance.

Thanks a million for your major help and dedicated work. You are doing a great job in this forume.

Would you mind if I asked a couple of other questions?

Best Wishes

Concerning objective section: I intend to get a work in rural area of work as a medical researcher assistance? Shall I put it before summary section?

OBJECTIVE
To obtain a post as a GP in rural area or work as a medical researcher assistant
Is it ok?

The reason I put inforamtion about IELTS test and my medical shool in the summary section, and also mentioned IELTS Score in skill section is because the two primary conditions for obtaining a work in that country are these ones, so is it ok to put them in the summary section?

I'm good with working with SPSS software wich is a statistical software and is used very often in medical research, should i mention it in summary section, or does it suffice to mention it in skill section?

I think my age would be important to them, Where does it go in this CV?

I lectured for groups of patients and personnel in weekly basis, shall I write:
Delivered lectures about most common and important health issues for groupes of patients and personnel on weekly basis. ?

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