The effects of social networking sites on an individual and a community.

Social Networking sites like Instagram, Twitter, Facebook, etc are popular online platforms nowadays which makes it easy to connect with people. Some people think that these platforms outweigh more negative effects than positive ones to an individual as well as to a society but my opinion is little different as I believe these platforms are more beneficial to an individual and more detrimental to a community.

First of all, let me discuss the benefits of this technology . We all know how Facebook is making it possible to connect with people not only from different parts of the country but also from across the globe. This connectivity helps users to make new friends, discuss their interested topics, ask their queries, etc. For example, in Facebook, users just need to send friend requests, and once accepted they become friends, atleast virtually. This is also beneficial for an shy individual who finds it difficult to make friend in the real world . Also, for those who want to ask their queries such as from engineering, medical, investment etc can post such their problems in a platform like Quora where experts from around the world are ready to answer. Again, there are various discussion forums in Facebook, Telegram, Instagram, etc where people discuss their hobbies such as their favorite sports , music, movies etc. As we can see, all these things are made possible by these social networking sites.

On the contrary, these platforms show negative impact to a community. As people are becoming more interested in online conversation, real live interaction is diminising. It is irony to see that that thought people can easily express themselves by posting their thoughts in Facebook but unfortunately such expressiveness is absent in real live interaction. The consequence of this is the bonding between the people in society is becoming weaker.

In conclusion, these platforms show more advantages to an individual while more disadvantages to a community. Only if the people know how to limit their online usage and give time to society , then overall, these platforms would prove to be more beneficial.

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"Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? "

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class candle 16"Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? "

Well, you never answered the essay prompt. To what extent do you agree? You must answer with an adverb of extent. Do you know any?

It is very important to read the instructions carefully, and write your thesis statement based on the essay prompt. Then defend your answer in the body paragraphs.

Social Networking sites like Instagram, Twitter, Facebook, etc (Do not use "..." or "etc." or phrases such as "and so on" in formal writing.) are popular online platforms nowadays which makes it easy for people to to connect with each other. people. Some people think that these platforms outweigh more have negative effects than positive ones to on an individual as well as their to a society but my opinion is little different (The essay prompt is not "What is your opinion?") as I believe these platforms are more beneficial to an individual and more detrimental to a community.

You did not write the correct essay type. This is not an "advantages/disadvantages " essay. You will not get a good score for "task response" because you did not approach the topic as instructed. You must learn to distinguish the five different types of essay, and how to answer each one. See the table below. Also, at 345 words, your essay is too long. Aim for 270-290 words.

First of all, let me discuss the benefits of this technology . (That is not good. Do not tell the reader what you are going to discuss.) Just defend your position. ) We all know how Facebook is making it possible to connect with people not only from different parts of the country but also from across the globe. This connectivity helps users to make new friends, discuss their interested topics of mutual interest, ask their queries, etc. For example, in Facebook, users just need to send friend requests, and once accepted they become friends, atleast virtually. This is also beneficial for an shy individual who finds it difficult to make friend (wrong form) in the real world . Also, for those who want to ask their queries such as from about engineering, medical, (wrong form) investment etc can post such their problems (wrong expression) in a platform like Quora where experts from around the world are ready to answer. Again, there are various discussion forums in Facebook, Telegram, Instagram, etc where people discuss their hobbies such as their favorite sports , music, movies etc. As we can see, all these things are made possible by these social networking sites.

On the contrary, these platforms show negative impact to a community. As people are becoming more interested in online conversation, real live interaction is diminising. It is irony (wrong form) to see that that thought (wrong word) people can easily express themselves by posting their thoughts in Facebook but unfortunately such expressiveness is absent in real live interaction. The consequence of this is the bonding between the people in society is becoming weaker.

In conclusion, these platforms show more advantages to an individual while more disadvantages to a community. Only if the people know how to limit their online usage and give time to society , then overall, these platforms would prove to be more beneficial. (The task did not ask for a recommendation or solution. If you give one, you will lose points.)


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AlpheccaStarsThis is also beneficial for an shy individual who finds it difficult to make friend in the real world .

Kindly tell me what would be the appropriate form of the above underlying word .

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AlpheccaStarsThis is also beneficial for an shy individual who finds it difficult to make friend in the real world .

Kindly tell me what would be the appropriate form of the above underlying word .


Friend is a noun.

Nouns have three forms in English:

1. singular

2. plural

3. possessive

One of the critical skills in basic English is to use these forms with articles (a, an, the) correctly in sentences.

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