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Hi

what do you think about this. it's about law office's services

1. We provide our clients with the most effective legal advice within the scope of:

professional training of the employees for purposes of claims management in the company. (Is it OK to write "for purposes")

economic arbitration by cooperation with Arbitration Court of Commerce

mediations concerning financial claims

legal representation in negotiations with debtors and court representation in assigned cases.

What do You think?
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I think it's basically fine, but stuffily styled. Some polishing:

We provide our clients with expert legal advice in the areas of:

- Professional training for company employees in claims management-- (Is it OK to write "for purposes"-- too wordy)

- Economic arbitration through cooperation with the Arbitration Court of Commerce -- (I don't know what 'economic arbitration' is, though.)

- Mediation of financial claims

- Legal representation in negotiations with debtors and court representation in assigned cases
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thank you very much for your reply! it was helpful!