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This is a paragraph which I have written to use some newly learnt vocabulary words. I have made all the learnt words bold. Kindly check for mistakes.

Sam was talking incessantly in the Physics class. He was ranting about the vicarious thrill that he gets by playing violent games in the smartphone. Listening to him, I realized, these games are the reason why Sam rationalizes his violent and aggressive behavior. I am his close friend and well aware about the gregariousness of my friend. But his constant chatter was becoming intolerable for the professor. Suddenly, the professor pointed out my friend with his finger and asked him to stand up. Then he started a diatribe against my friend. At that point of time, one of the most obsequious students of our class complained about the violent behavior of Sam. I could easily sense the obsequiousness from his way of talking. It was not at all the right time to complain about Sam's behavior. Sam became maudlin in the class and I could literally see tears in his eyes. I think this was a turning point of Sam's life. After this lecture, we both sat together and discussed his problem. I advised Sam that he needs to sublimate his aggression into something creative.

Next day he did something amazing. He wrote "Sorry Classmates" on the blackboard to expiate his mistakes. Everybody knew it was written by Sam and they came to him turn by turn to console. I was really proud of my friend. Even the obsequious guy who imputed Sam for violent behavior said sorry to him. I remember vividly that Sam was hesitant to attend the Physics lecture because of last day's incident and I was importuning him to attend the lecture and face the teacher. My efforts did not go in vain and he attended the lecture. This time sitting silently and attentive in the class. That year Sam scored the maximum CGP in class.

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Sudhir Sharma 4255Sam was talking incessantly in the Physics class.

Excellent

Sudhir Sharma 4255. He was ranting about the vicarious thrill that he gets by playing violent games in the on his smartphone.

Ranting is not correct. Ranting is complaining loudly and bitterly. A "vicarious thrill" is exciting and elating. You would not rant about that.

Sudhir Sharma 4255I am his close friend and well aware of about the gregariousness of my friend.

Possible. It means he likes to be around lots of other people, chatting and joking.

Sudhir Sharma 4255I advised Sam that he needs to sublimate his aggression into something creative.

It is used correctly, but I would use "redirect" or perhaps "transform."

Sublimate is used mostly in chemistry. It is very rarely used in the psychological sense.

Sudhir Sharma 4255Everybody knew it was written by Sam and they came to him one by one turn by turn to console.

"console" is not correct. Also, it requires an object.

Sudhir Sharma 4255Even the obsequious guy who imputed Sam for violent behavior said sorry to him.

That is not good. Maybe you mean deride, denounce, castigate, or censure.

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Your use of the words is correct, except maybe "gregariousness". It's like you meant "garrulousness".

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@AlpheccaStars .. I have corrected the use of word console.

Everybody knew it was written by Sam and they consoled him one by one.

AlpheccaStarsEven the obsequious guy who imputed Sam for violent behavior said sorry to him.

Here imputed is in the sense of blaming. To impute means to ascribe. Why do you think it is wrong?

Sudhir Sharma 4255 To impute means to ascribe. Why do you think it is wrong?

It is a word so rarely used, that I had to find an example on Google ngrams. There are zero collocations of "impute for"


I found a a few examples in some formal texts. It will give you an idea of how the verb is used. I wouldn't bother learning this word unless you are going into finance.

It is usual to say that we impute the merit, the sin, the crime, to the person responsible for the behavior thus characterized. But the true meaning of the statement that a merit is imputed to a person is that the person ought to be rewarded for his merit.

We may impute the fraudulent, criminal, or other improper conduct of any officer, director, shareholder, partner, employee, or other individual associated with an organization, to that organization when the improper conduct occurred in connection with a partnership, joint venture, or similar arrangement...

Scientists must neutralize the tendency to impute their own beliefs and feelings to their subjects.

When Margaret Mead noted that Americans are immigrants both in space and in time, she was suggesting that her fellow citizens often impute their failures to the traditions and the history of the countries from which they originate.

For purposes of determining the scope of debarment, conduct may be imputed as follows: (1) Conduct imputed to participant. The fraudulent, criminal or other seriously improper conduct of any officer, director, shareholder,...

Historically, courts sometimes imputed the negligence of another person to a plaintiff even though, under similar circumstances, they would not have imputed the negligence of that person to a defendant .

I do not wish to take the responsibility of putting Yeats or anybody else into Hell and I do not want to impute to him the particular vice which took Brunetto there.

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