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Subject: Request for the adjustment of leaves as mandatory leave

Respected Sir,

I was on leave for fifteen days because I had burnt my foot with hot water. My doctor advised me to have a complete bed rest until my complete recovery otherwise the wound might get infacted. There was no one at my home who could bring my application so I informed my branch head about it and he allowed the leave. I, therefore, request you to conside these fifteen day's leave as my mandatory leave which the company allow to its employees once a year with pay. So that the company do not deduct my salary.

I hope that keeping in view the circumstances caused my leave you will give me a positive response.

Thanks in anticipation.

Yours truly,

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Subject: Request for the adjustment of leaves as mandatory leave (Leaves grow on trees. "Leave," meaning time off work, is non-count)

Respected Sir,

I was on sick leave for fifteen days because I had burnt my foot with hot water. My doctor advised me to have a complete bed rest until my complete recovery otherwise (missing punctuation. You have two main clauses here.) the wound might get infacted. There was no one at my home who could bring my application (comma) so I informed my branch head about it and he allowed the leave. I, therefore, request you to conside these fifteen day's leave as my mandatory leave which the company allow (wrong form) to its employees once a year with pay. So (wrong punctuation) that the company do (wrong form) not deduct (missing words - You need an object. ... deduct money from my salary.. ) my salary.

I hope that keeping in view of the circumstances (missing word - you need a relative pronoun) caused my leave you will give me a positive response.

Thanks in anticipation.

Yours truly,

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Subject: Request for the adjustment of leave as mandatory leave

Respected Sir,

I was on sick leave for fifteen days because I had burnt my foot with hot water. My doctor advised me to have complete bed rest until my complete recovery; otherwise the wound might get infaction. There was no one at home who could bring my application, so I informed my branch head about it and he allowed the leave. I, therefore, request you to consider these fifteen day's leave as my mandatory leave which the company allows its employees once a year with pay, so that the company does not deduct money fron my salary.

I hope that keeping in view of the circumstances that caused my leave you will give me a positive response.

Thanks in anticipation.

Yours truly,

Is it fine now?

Subject: Request for the adjustment of leave as mandatory leave

Respected Sir,

I was on sick leave for fifteen days because I had burnt my foot with hot water. My doctor advised me to have complete bed rest until my complete recovery; otherwise the wound might get infected. There was no one at home who could bring my application, so I informed my branch manager head about it and he allowed the leave. I, therefore, request you to consider these fifteen day's leave as my mandatory leave which the company allows its employees once a year with pay, so that the company does not deduct money from my salary.

I hope that, keeping in view of the circumstances that caused my leave, you will give me a positive response.

Thanks in anticipation.

Yours truly,