Hi Friends,

Can you please check following mail and confirme me.

I would like to apply for leave from May 14th. To May. 15th because I will be going to my hometown.

Thanks and Regards,

Murali Krishna K
You just need to sort out the punctuation. You have a couple of randomly placed full stops (periods).

I would like to apply for leave from May 14th to May 15th because I will be going to my hometown.
Good!! short and to the point!!!!!!!!!!!!

KmvkrishnaHi Friends,

Can you please check following mail and confirme me.

I would like to apply for leave from May 14th. To May. 15th because I will be going to my hometown.

Thanks and Regards,

Murali Krishna K